Invitation help

I want to order my invites but I am doing it online so no one is available to proof it for me. Could you guys please help me out and check it over for errors???
TIA

Because you have shared in their lives
Through your laughter and love
Christine xxxxx
and
Graham xxxxxx
Together with their parents
Invite you to share
The beginning of their new life together
When they exchange marriage vows
On Saturday, the sixteenth of July
Two thousand and five
At three o'clock in the afternoon
Sacred Heart Church
215-38 35th Avenue
Bayside, New York

This is the exact wording- I want to order them but I am scared I am going to screw it up and have to re-order. Is is grammatically correct? Should I change anything???
TIA

The only thing Im not sure about is if sixteenth should be capitalized. The rest sounds beautiful. Good luck

Very nice - but you spelled sixteenth incorrectly

Thanks guys! I will edit the sixteenth since its correct on the invite I have. I just was worried about the grammer. I always have had problems with my tenses.
They do have templetes but I really didn't like any of them. I took this one from a few I liked on www.verses.com and made it my own.