INVITATION HELP! long!

OK so we ordered the print it yourself invitations. the back page is going to be a b&w pic of us,top layer is velum with the invite written on it. they will be tied together with a dark red bow with a snowflake charm in the middle and i am sprinkeling fake snow in the envelopes.....what do u think of this wording corny or cute?
Our love is a treasure to unwrap
and cherish everyday
In this season of giving
please join us as we,
BRIDE
AND
GROOM
Give eachother our lives
on day
, year etc.........

OR
True love is the reason we will gather this season, wedding bells will ring what joy christmas brings!

Then the response will read
The season wont be jolly without you!
please respond by DATE
m------------------------
----will be there with bells on
----wrapped up somewhere else


thanks girls!!!

This first one is a little cheesy (not bad, just a little), IMO I think the second version is perfect, very sweet-and I love what you are writing on your response cards!

eta: the fake snow is a cute idea!