Invitation Revision

HotAir Posted: Nov 30, 2008 09:15 AM

Invitation Revision

The first picture is of the first proof.. I thought that it would look nicer if the blue was broken up a bit by ribbon and the direction was changed.

The second (with the ribbon) is the new one.
Please be honest. What do you think?

HotAir Posted: Nov 30, 2008 09:20 AM

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The old outside.

And, the new one with the ribbon:

Jennmolloy Posted: Nov 30, 2008 09:52 AM

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I like the horizontal invite but I like the new one with the ribbon. I brakes up the blue. Is there a way tp put the ribbon on the first one.

HotAir Posted: Nov 30, 2008 09:58 AM

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I thought of that at first but I don't think the ribbon woudl flow with the first one. I think with the second layout it appears like it is a continuation from the way it is wrapped (if that makes any sense).

Summertimegal424 Posted: Nov 30, 2008 10:42 AM

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i like the first pic shown, but the front i like it with the ribbon!

MLAngelo Posted: Nov 30, 2008 10:59 AM

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I like the first one better.

MaggieLuvsJoe Posted: Nov 30, 2008 11:05 AM

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I like the first one better

HotAir Posted: Nov 30, 2008 11:07 AM

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Why does everyone like the first one better? lol it's so funny because I was thinking that it was too folder like and thought changing the direction and adding a ribbon would be better. no?

CloudNine Posted: Nov 30, 2008 11:38 AM

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i lik ethe first one better. maybe its the color of the ribbon that i dont like, not sure. i see you have pink in the invite but i think that thickness of the ribbon being pink is making me not like it.

i prefer the first one

FinallyMrsB18 Posted: Nov 30, 2008 11:41 AM

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the new one i agree with you

twoifbysea Posted: Nov 30, 2008 11:42 AM

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I like the layout of the first one better, but agree that it's a lot of blue. Can they incorporate a narrower ribbon or detail to break it up a bit?

dazies1011 Posted: Nov 30, 2008 11:48 AM

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Posted by Summertimegal424

i like the first pic shown, but the front i like it with the ribbon!

I agree

MrsList09 Posted: Nov 30, 2008 12:08 PM

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I like the original one better. I think with the ribbon it's getting a little busy. The pattern is so colorful and prominent and then you have 3 border colors and a big pink ribbon.

I think you also have too many border colors. I'd pick either the orange OR the pink on teh border and not have both. If you do decide to go with ribbon, I would use something narrower becuase it's puckering because it's too big for the crease on the bottom V of the pocketfold with the inserts.

megsher Posted: Nov 30, 2008 12:12 PM

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I love the new one!

LeeAnne Posted: Nov 30, 2008 02:27 PM

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i like the ribbon but i like the horizontal layout better.

coldasice217 Posted: Nov 30, 2008 02:28 PM

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I honestly like the first one better...it's cleaner.

lauraandrob2009 Posted: Nov 30, 2008 02:28 PM

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I like the first one better. I don't really care for the ribbon - the floral is enough of a pop in my opinion. I think it's really pretty. Love your colors.

shell1879 Posted: Nov 30, 2008 02:29 PM

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how about incorperating the orange too?
like having a orange ribbon layered on top of the pink?

HotAir Posted: Nov 30, 2008 02:34 PM

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Posted by shell1879

how about incorperating the orange too?
like having a orange ribbon layered on top of the pink?

I would love to see what that looks like. I'm worried it might be too much. I'm thinking of getting the proof and then checking it out myself once I get it (adding an orange ribbon layered on top).