invitation wording
Does this sound right?
Together with their families,
the honour of your presence is requested
at the marriage ceremony of
Rebecca & Michael......blah, blah, ...
It just sounds wrong but I can't figure out a better way. The problem is that our names are in the middle of the invite ( because there is a cut out to see our names from the outside) So our names have to be in the middle and under our names is the time & place so I can't fit anything else in under it.
I don't want to write individual parent names so I thought their families would be best but the whole sentance sounds strange. Any advice?
Together with their families,
the honour of your presence is requested
at the marriage ceremony of
Rebecca & Michael......blah, blah, ...
It just sounds wrong but I can't figure out a better way. The problem is that our names are in the middle of the invite ( because there is a cut out to see our names from the outside) So our names have to be in the middle and under our names is the time & place so I can't fit anything else in under it.
I don't want to write individual parent names so I thought their families would be best but the whole sentance sounds strange. Any advice?
