Invitation Wording

Invitation Wording

I'm craeting DIY yourself inviations and after printing them all out I think I screwed up

Here is my wording:

Mr. & Mrs. John Doe
request the honour of your presence
at the marriage of his daughter

Jane Marie Doe
to
John Michael Doe

son of
Mrs. Jean Doe

*etc*

Here's my problem...Am I not suppose to include my & FH last names because our parents are listed with our last names? Should it just be our first and middle name?

So frustrating and I'm mad that I didn't catch this before I printed 250.

Thank you.

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I didn't use last names it is unnecessary since the parents last names are shown

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we didn't put our last names on it since it is already stated in our invite.

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I wouldn't have put the last names, but it's probably not a huge deal. It should also be 'their' daughter.

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I think it can go either way to put your last names or not. I probably wouldn't have if both me and FH had the same last name as our parents, but it's still ok! Don't worry!

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If the parents last names are on there than you don't need to include it with your names but it isn't that big of a deal. I think it will be fine. I believe you probably put 'his' because your dad is remarried... if not then yes 'his' should be 'their'.

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Thank you for all your input.

Yes 'his' is correct. I have a stepmother

Thank you.

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Most invites dont include the last name. I do NOT think it is a big deal. My bet is it is not something anybody would take notice. I would keep printing if I were you, no worries!