invitation wording

Which do you ladies like better? FH and I are paying for pretty much everything but my mom and FILs want their names on the invite... Neither side is paying for more ( technically) if you include my dress and accessories etc my mom is definatly paying for more but not when it comes to the party....

ok here are the two im thinking

Today i will marry my friend, the one i laugh with live for dream with and love

Lauren Michelle ______
and
Rosario ____

Together with their parents
Ms. Barbra _____ and
Mr and Mrs Bruno ____

Request the honor or your presence as we exchange our wedding vows

Sunday the 26th of June 2011

OR

Ms. Barbra ___ and
Mr and Mrs Bruno ____

Request the honor of your presence at the marriage of thier children

Lauren Michelle ____
and
Rosario _______

date/time/ location

BTW our parents agreed to pay for the invitation.....

TIA :)

first one, but i think you should change the tense from:

Request the honor or your presence as we exchange our wedding vows

to:

Request the honor or your presence as they exchange their wedding vows


since you say 'together with their parents' right before that

I like the first one better

Ours say

Together with their parents

Lisa (middle, last)
and
Robert (middle last)

request the honour of your presence at their wedding on.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

(we used wedding instead of marriage since he is divorced and never got annulled and some of his family are old school). we're having an interfaith civil ceremony and paying ourselves for the wedding

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Posted by wearefamily608

Ours say

Together with their parents

Lisa (middle, last)
and
Robert (middle last)

request the honour of your presence at their wedding on.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

(we used wedding instead of marriage since he is divorced and never got annulled and some of his family are old school). we're having an interfaith civil ceremony and paying ourselves for the wedding

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We wanted to do this originally, but my mom FLIPPED out when i told her so we are trying to comprimise...