invitation wording help

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Posted by mnd1202

i havent seen it for just the bride but cant u just write it yourself and put together with blah blah blah?

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that's a good idea, thanks!

np

Jess and Mike
Together with
Mr. And Mrs. Brides parents

or

Mr.and Mrs Brides parents
together with
Jess and Mike

Thanks girls! Does this sound ok? I feel like marriage ceremony sounds weird but just putting marriage was even weirder.

ETA: I changed marriage ceremony to wedding ceremony, maybe that's a little better?

Mr. & Mrs. Peter ---------
Together with
Jessica Michelle
and
Michael James ---------------
Request the honor of your presence
At their wedding ceremony
Sunday, the fourteenth of September
Two thousand and eight
at eleven o'clock in the morning
Milleridge Cottage
585 North Broadway
Jericho, New York

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Posted by MikeandJess

Thanks girls! Does this sound ok? I feel like marriage ceremony sounds weird but just putting marriage was even weirder.

Mr. & Mrs. Peter ---------
Together with
Jessica Michelle
and
Michael James ---------------
Request the honor of your presence
At their marriage ceremony
Sunday, the fourteenth of September
Two thousand and eight
at eleven o'clock in the morning
Milleridge Cottage
585 North Broadway
Jericho, New York

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poifect!

ok Fh said at their wedding ceremony is weird because the guests will be confused whose marriage it is since we have my parents names their too I don't know how else to word that

you can say at their marriage ceremony cuz your names are last..

if it was
jess
and
mike
together with
mr. and mrs

that would sound like it was your parents getting married

does that make sense?

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Posted by Soon2BMrsD

you can say at their marriage ceremony cuz your names are last..

if it was
jess
and
mike
together with
mr. and mrs

that would sound like it was your parents getting married

does that make sense?

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I'll try to convince FH of that, he's not happy with it and is tooling around on my space instead of helping me find invitation wording examples

let me see what i can find.. i spend like 6 weeks making sure the wording was right

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Posted by Soon2BMrsD

let me see what i can find.. i spend like 6 weeks making sure the wording was right

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thanks megan!

this is my invite wording, not typical or correct to some people, I do not care!

Ms. Emily Jones
requests the pleasure of your company
at the marriage of her daughter
Kimberlee Ann Jones

to

Paul Robert Smith
son of Mrs. Anne Smith
on Saturday, the fourth of October
two thousand and eight
at half past eleven o'clock <----note the time change
in the morning
<------added a space here
Jericho Terrace
Mineola, New York

Reception immediately following

Mr. & Mrs. Peter ---------
Together with
Jessica Michelle
and
Michael James ---------------
Request the honor of your presence
When they exchange marriage vows
Sunday, the fourteenth of September
Two thousand and eight
at eleven o'clock in the morning
Milleridge Cottage
585 North Broadwa


Mr. & Mrs. Peter ---------
Together with
Jessica Michelle
and
Michael James ---------------
invite you to share in the joy
when they exchange marriage vows
Sunday, the fourteenth of September
Two thousand and eight
at eleven o'clock in the morning
Milleridge Cottage
585 North Broadwa

Before they met, their strength was of one
Through marriage, they will experience
the strengh of much more than two
Jessica Michelle
and
Michael James
together with Mr. and Mrs.---------
invite you to witness and celebrate
the joining of their lives
Sunday, the fourteenth of September
Two thousand and eight
at eleven o'clock in the morning
Milleridge Cottage
585 North Broadwa

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Posted by MrsK2008

this is my invite wording, not typical or correct to some people, I do not care!

Ms. Emily Jones
requests the pleasure of your company
at the marriage of her daughter
Kimberlee Ann Jones

to

Paul Robert Smith
son of Mrs. Anne Smith
on Saturday, the fourth of October
two thousand and eight
at half past eleven o'clock <----note the time change
in the morning
<------added a space here
Jericho Terrace
Mineola, New York

Reception immediately following

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this was the other one i was looking for i like this one alot

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Posted by MrsK2008

this is my invite wording, not typical or correct to some people, I do not care!

Ms. Emily Jones
requests the pleasure of your company
at the marriage of her daughter
Kimberlee Ann Jones

to

Paul Robert Smith
son of Mrs. Anne Smith
on Saturday, the fourth of October
two thousand and eight
at half past eleven o'clock <----note the time change
in the morning
<------added a space here
Jericho Terrace
Mineola, New York

Reception immediately following

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awesome, thank you!

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Posted by Soon2BMrsD

Mr. & Mrs. Peter ---------
Together with
Jessica Michelle
and
Michael James ---------------
Request the honor of your presence
When they exchange marriage vows
Sunday, the fourteenth of September
Two thousand and eight
at eleven o'clock in the morning
Milleridge Cottage
585 North Broadwa


Mr. & Mrs. Peter ---------
Together with
Jessica Michelle
and
Michael James ---------------
invite you to share in the joy
when they exchange marriage vows
Sunday, the fourteenth of September
Two thousand and eight
at eleven o'clock in the morning
Milleridge Cottage
585 North Broadwa

Before they met, their strength was of one
Through marriage, they will experience
the strengh of much more than two
Jessica Michelle
and
Michael James
together with Mr. and Mrs.---------
invite you to witness and celebrate
the joining of their lives
Sunday, the fourteenth of September
Two thousand and eight
at eleven o'clock in the morning
Milleridge Cottage
585 North Broadwa

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You rock megan, thanks!

no prob i hope these help

i used verse it for ours. and just tweeked it to say what we wanted. but just get an idea

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Posted by Soon2BMrsD

no prob i hope these help

i used verse it for ours. and just tweeked it to say what we wanted. but just get an idea

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they helped a lot, we came up with this, I think this is our final version but he's calling his sister to check it over for us, she's smart.

Because you have shared in our lives
By your friendship and love, we
Jessica Michelle
and
Michael James ---------.
Together with Mr. & Mrs. Peter ---------
Request the honor of your presence
At their wedding ceremony
Sunday, the fourteenth of September
Two thousand and eight
At eleven o'clock in the morning
Milleridge Cottage
585 North Broadway
Jericho, New York