invitation wording HELP!

ness83 Posted: Oct 01, 2010 12:32 PM

invitation wording HELP!

Ok this is what is on my invitation right now but it seems to me like the grammar is off.

On this day I will marry my best friend -
the one I laugh with, live for, dream with, love...

Vanessa __________
and
Juan______________

invite you to share in the beginning
of our new life together
when we exchange marriage vows
Friday, the twenty-fifth of Mrch
two thousand and eleven
at half after three o'clock in the afternoon

Should it say 'their new life together when they exchange marriage vows'? or it correct as is?

FutureMRS.Benn Posted: Oct 01, 2010 12:35 PM

Re: invitation wording HELP!

I think it sounds great the way you have it!!

Soon2BMrsJoeBear Posted: Oct 01, 2010 12:51 PM

Re: invitation wording HELP!

Posted by FutureMRS.Benn

I think it sounds great the way you have it!!

ITA

sjr385 Posted: Oct 01, 2010 07:09 PM

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CleoBear Posted: Oct 01, 2010 09:47 PM

Re: invitation wording HELP!

I think the correct way would be their and they vs. using our and we...

allornil Posted: Oct 01, 2010 09:52 PM

Re: invitation wording HELP!

It really depends on how you want the message to come across. We/our is more personal and shows you are paying for the wedding.

They/their doesnt match your quote btw