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invitation wording- what do you think of this?

jags77

invitation wording- what do you think of this?

this will be the start of the wording:

'As you have shared in their lives
by your friendship and love,
you are invited to share
in this joyous celebration.

Mr. and Mrs. xx request the honour of your----- '


Should I substitute 'because' for 'as' - that's how most of the sites have it but i didn't like the word 'because'.

any other suggestions?
sophie78

Re: invitation wording- what do you think of this?

Because sounds fine. You could also use 'since.' I don't think 'as' is grammatically correct.

patrice1128

Re: invitation wording- what do you think of this?

I used 'because' in mine - it sounds nice
I also changed the word 'by' to 'with'

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