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Invitations - Can Someone Please Review this???

ChrissynRicky Posted:

Invitations - Can Someone Please Review this???

INVITATION:
The honour of your presence is requested
at the marriage of
Christine Ann XXX
daughter of
Mr. and Mrs. Tabet and Ikram XXX
to
Richard XXX
son of
Mr. and Mrs. Richard and Linda XXX
on Sunday, the Thirtieth of April
Two Thousand and Six
at three o'clock in the afternoon
Our Lady of Lebanon Cathedral
113 Remsen Street
Brooklyn, New York 11201

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RECEPTION:
Mr. and Mrs. Tabet and Ikram XXX
and
Mrs. and Mrs. Richard and Linda XXX
request the pleasure of your company
at the marriage reception of their children
Christine Ann XXX and Richard XXX
Sunday, the Thirtieth of April
Two Thousand and Six
at seven o'clock in the evening
Fox Hollow
7725 Jericho Turnpike
Woodbury, New York 11979

_______________________________
DIRECTION CARDS:

OUR LADY OF LEBANON CATHEDRAL
113 Remsen Street, Brooklyn, NY 11201
~
BROOKLYN-QUEENS EXPRESSWAY (1-278)
BQE (I-278) to Exit 27 (Atlantic Avenue)
Take the Atlantic Avenue Ramp
Turn Slight Right onto Atlantic Avenue
Turn Left onto Hicks Street
Turn Right onto Remsen Street

FOX HOLLOW
7725 Jericho Turnpike, Woobury, NY 11979
~
LONG ISLAND EXPRESSWAY
Long Island Expressway to Exit 44 North (Rt. 135 North)
*To Exit 14 East (Woodbury 25 East)
At Exit, make right turn onto Jericho Turnpike
Fox Hollow is on the left at the 2nd Traffic Light.

NORTHERN STATE PARKWAY
Northern State Parkway to Exit 36B North (Rt. 135 North)
Follow As Above*

BELT PARKWAY / SOUTHERN STATE PARKWAY
Belt Parkway East to Southern State Parkway to
Exit 28A North (Rt. 135 North)
Follow As Above*


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RSVP: Response Date: March 20, 2006

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My Questions:
1) Where do I include Hotel Blocking Information? Should I just include another insert or just put it somewhere on the reception/rsvp/invitation card?

2) Is it okay that I didn't include directions from the Church directly to the Hall?

3) Am I missing anything?

stephanief Posted:

Re: Invitations - Can Someone Please Review this???

With the hotel blocking, the hotel should give you cards to include. If not, I would print out another card with all the details to include with the invites. Everything else looks good, good job!!!!

JessicaM. Posted:

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I would think you include the hotel info on the reception card only.

looks very lovely. good job Christine.
BEANS Posted:

Re: Invitations - Can Someone Please Review this???

1. I would include another insert for the hotels

2. Directions from church to hall, I think that is a good idea BUT what if people are going to the hotel after church? If you blocked rooms at Fox Hollow then it works.

3. I think you have it all covered--as usual!
ChrissynRicky Posted:

Re: Invitations - Can Someone Please Review this???


Posted by BEANS

1. I would include another insert for the hotels

2. Directions from church to hall, I think that is a good idea BUT what if people are going to the hotel after church? If you blocked rooms at Fox Hollow then it works.

3. I think you have it all covered--as usual!



Yes, we booked at the Inn, so it's next door.

Okay, I'll include directions from Church to Hall - thanks!

As far as the Hotel Info - I got the cards from the hotel, but sent them out with the STD's...I think I'll just ask for more cards to be sent, and include them...even though they won't match...Yes, I'm that OCD....okay, maybe i'll have another insert made...ugh...
BEANS Posted:

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Posted by ChristineAE


Posted by BEANS

1. I would include another insert for the hotels

2. Directions from church to hall, I think that is a good idea BUT what if people are going to the hotel after church? If you blocked rooms at Fox Hollow then it works.

3. I think you have it all covered--as usual!



Yes, we booked at the Inn, so it's next door.

Okay, I'll include directions from Church to Hall - thanks!

As far as the Hotel Info - I got the cards from the hotel, but sent them out with the STD's...I think I'll just ask for more cards to be sent, and include them...even though they won't match...Yes, I'm that OCD....okay, maybe i'll have another insert made...ugh...



Don't have another insert made...can't you stick Fox Hollow's direction card behind the Accomodations card? You don't have to worry about matching if you do it like that.
ChrissynRicky Posted:

Re: Invitations - Can Someone Please Review this???


Posted by BEANS


Posted by ChristineAE


Posted by BEANS

1. I would include another insert for the hotels

2. Directions from church to hall, I think that is a good idea BUT what if people are going to the hotel after church? If you blocked rooms at Fox Hollow then it works.

3. I think you have it all covered--as usual!



Yes, we booked at the Inn, so it's next door.

Okay, I'll include directions from Church to Hall - thanks!

As far as the Hotel Info - I got the cards from the hotel, but sent them out with the STD's...I think I'll just ask for more cards to be sent, and include them...even though they won't match...Yes, I'm that OCD....okay, maybe i'll have another insert made...ugh...



Don't have another insert made...can't you stick Fox Hollow's direction card behind the Accomodations card? You don't have to worry about matching if you do it like that.



Okay, I'll 'hide' it in between the other stuff!
BEANS Posted:

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Okay good...I am glad that it will work. No need to spend more $$$$$$$ on another insert. Don't worry-you will be helping me do this in about 2 weeks!!!
M&S Sept12006 Posted:

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Christine, everything sounds beautiful!

The direction and hotel inserts are fine. All looks good. Im sure you're going to proof-read your invitations and all before its printed so dont try to cram it all into one time. You'll have a chance to review and alter things if need be.
maria5-6-05 Posted:

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Christine, It sounds perfect to me. And I agree....just hide the hotel info.
lrs2005 Posted:

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Oh the one thing I would add to the hotel card is the price. I actually had an OOT guest call and ask my mom if my mom would pay for their hotel or let them stay at my mom's. Yeah I am sure that was a fun call....
littlelostbride Posted:

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Posted by ChristineAE

_______________________________
DIRECTION CARDS:

OUR LADY OF LEBANON CATHEDRAL
113 Remsen Street, Brooklyn, NY 11201
~
BROOKLYN-QUEENS EXPRESSWAY (1-278)
BQE (I-278) to Exit 27 (Atlantic Avenue)
Take the Atlantic Avenue Ramp
Turn Slight Right onto Atlantic Avenue
Turn Left onto Hicks Street
Turn Right onto Remsen Street

FOX HOLLOW
7725 Jericho Turnpike, Woobury, NY 11979
~




Looks GREAT!!

In case you're copying and pasting to the printer, I found 2 things:
-- 'BROOKLYN-QUEENS EXPRESSWAY (1-278)' change the '1' to a CAP I for (I-278)'
-- 'FOX HOLLOW
7725 Jericho Turnpike, Woobury, NY 11979' change 'Woobury' to 'Woodbury' add a 'd'

I know, I'm obsessive! I have done time as a proofreader.

ChrissynRicky Posted:

Re: Invitations - Can Someone Please Review this???


Posted by littlelostbride


Posted by ChristineAE

_______________________________
DIRECTION CARDS:

OUR LADY OF LEBANON CATHEDRAL
113 Remsen Street, Brooklyn, NY 11201
~
BROOKLYN-QUEENS EXPRESSWAY (1-278)
BQE (I-278) to Exit 27 (Atlantic Avenue)
Take the Atlantic Avenue Ramp
Turn Slight Right onto Atlantic Avenue
Turn Left onto Hicks Street
Turn Right onto Remsen Street

FOX HOLLOW
7725 Jericho Turnpike, Woobury, NY 11979
~




Looks GREAT!!

In case you're copying and pasting to the printer, I found 2 things:
-- 'BROOKLYN-QUEENS EXPRESSWAY (1-278)' change the '1' to a CAP I for (I-278)'
-- 'FOX HOLLOW
7725 Jericho Turnpike, Woobury, NY 11979' change 'Woobury' to 'Woodbury' add a 'd'

I know, I'm obsessive! I have done time as a proofreader.




I LOVE YOU! THANK YOU! It's exactly what I needed!!!!!!!!
October Bliss Posted:

Re: Invitations - Can Someone Please Review this???


Posted by littlelostbride


Posted by ChristineAE

_______________________________
DIRECTION CARDS:

OUR LADY OF LEBANON CATHEDRAL
113 Remsen Street, Brooklyn, NY 11201
~
BROOKLYN-QUEENS EXPRESSWAY (1-278)
BQE (I-278) to Exit 27 (Atlantic Avenue)
Take the Atlantic Avenue Ramp
Turn Slight Right onto Atlantic Avenue
Turn Left onto Hicks Street
Turn Right onto Remsen Street

FOX HOLLOW
7725 Jericho Turnpike, Woobury, NY 11979
~




Looks GREAT!!

In case you're copying and pasting to the printer, I found 2 things:
-- 'BROOKLYN-QUEENS EXPRESSWAY (1-278)' change the '1' to a CAP I for (I-278)'
-- 'FOX HOLLOW
7725 Jericho Turnpike, Woobury, NY 11979' change 'Woobury' to 'Woodbury' add a 'd'

I know, I'm obsessive! I have done time as a proofreader.




Also the zip code in Woodbury is 11797 not 11979.
ChrissynRicky Posted:

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Posted by SexyEsq


Posted by littlelostbride


Posted by ChristineAE

_______________________________
DIRECTION CARDS:

OUR LADY OF LEBANON CATHEDRAL
113 Remsen Street, Brooklyn, NY 11201
~
BROOKLYN-QUEENS EXPRESSWAY (1-278)
BQE (I-278) to Exit 27 (Atlantic Avenue)
Take the Atlantic Avenue Ramp
Turn Slight Right onto Atlantic Avenue
Turn Left onto Hicks Street
Turn Right onto Remsen Street

FOX HOLLOW
7725 Jericho Turnpike, Woobury, NY 11979
~




Looks GREAT!!

In case you're copying and pasting to the printer, I found 2 things:
-- 'BROOKLYN-QUEENS EXPRESSWAY (1-278)' change the '1' to a CAP I for (I-278)'
-- 'FOX HOLLOW
7725 Jericho Turnpike, Woobury, NY 11979' change 'Woobury' to 'Woodbury' add a 'd'

I know, I'm obsessive! I have done time as a proofreader.




Also the zip code in Woodbury is 11797 not 11979.



THANK YOU!
MandM07-03-05 Posted:

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fox hollow gives you direction cards to the hall and on the other side it has all the info about the fox hollow inn. you can pick up the cards at any time and they give you as many as u need.

hmpena Posted:

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Sounds great chris!

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