invite helppppp!!

First off.... do i need capitals, commas or anything else grammar related?? Also, I have very limited space on the side i'm printing the invite on. I can barely fit what i have here. Do I need to have Villa Lombardi's listed on the bottom???


Because you have shared in their lives
by friendship and love
Mr. and Mrs. James ***** Jr.
request the honour of your presence
at the marriage of their daughter
Jennifer Marie *****
to
Nicholas Jay ******
on Saturday, the twelfth of November
two thousand eleven
at three O’clock in the afternoon
Parish of the Holy Cross
Nesconset, NY
Reception to follow at 7:30pm
Villa Lombardi’s

I used the same wording

I didn't want a separate reception card so I had mine say-

(after the church info)

Dinner and dancing to follow
at seven in the evening
(reception hall)
(address)

ooo hang on I just reread that!!

I think 7:30pm should be spelt out
'reception to follow at
half past seven in the evening'

only bc you spelt out the date and time of the church

thanks girls...

So I don't need periods anywhere? it's seems so wrong hahha.

and i can leave off Villa since i don't have room?

Kfizz is right about spelling out the time ( I know this because mine says 'half past six' and I remember thinking how odd that sounds lol)

If you're not doing a separate reception card, I would definitely include the address of VL. HTH!

You may have done this purposely, but honour with a 'u' is the british spelling. Just make sure you are consistent in using british spelling throughout..honour, favour, etc.

I also agree that the time should be spelled out