Invite wording ??
Which do you think sounds better. I have my opion but I wanted to see if others agreed with me.
First Wording option (this is what my current proof reads)
Because you have shared in our lives
with you friendship and love, we
Sandra L G***
and
Rani E G***
together with their parents
invite you to witness and celebrate
their marriage to one another
Sunday, the twenty-sixth of April
two thousand and nine
at half past five o'clock
in the evening
Second Wording option (It is almost the same but I am capitalizing words that could be revised)
Because you have shared in our lives
with you friendship and love, we
Sandra L G***
and
Rani E G***
together with OUR FAMILIES
invite you to witness and celebrate
OUR marriage to one another
Sunday, the twenty-sixth of April
two thousand and nine
at half past five o'clock
in the evening
TIA
First Wording option (this is what my current proof reads)
Because you have shared in our lives
with you friendship and love, we
Sandra L G***
and
Rani E G***
together with their parents
invite you to witness and celebrate
their marriage to one another
Sunday, the twenty-sixth of April
two thousand and nine
at half past five o'clock
in the evening
Second Wording option (It is almost the same but I am capitalizing words that could be revised)
Because you have shared in our lives
with you friendship and love, we
Sandra L G***
and
Rani E G***
together with OUR FAMILIES
invite you to witness and celebrate
OUR marriage to one another
Sunday, the twenty-sixth of April
two thousand and nine
at half past five o'clock
in the evening
TIA
