INVITE WORDING ...HELP!!

Which do you prefer....

The Honour of your Presence is requested
as the children of
Mr. & Mrs. John Smith and
Mr. & Mrs. Ted Jones

Karina
&
Mark

begin their new life together
when they exchnage vows of marriage
on Saturday the 25th of March


OR


The Honour of your presence is requested
at the marriage uniting
daughter of Mr. & Mrs. John Smith

Karina
&
Mark

son of Mr. & Mrs. Ted Jones
Saturday the 25th of March

PLEASE PLEASE let me know opinions or if there are any other suggestions. Keep in mind that we are paying for the wedding but we want to include our parents name on the invite. TIA GIRLS!!!!

I like #1 more. I like the children of line.
I have the same problem..too many people on the invite. We are probably going with...

Because you have shared in their lives
by your friendship and love
Mrs. Anne ___& Mr. Ray ___
Invite you to share with their daughter,
Cara ___and John ___
son of Mr. & Mrs. ___
when they exchange marriage vows
and begin their new life together
on Friday, the twenty-eighth of April
Two thousand and six
at five o'clock in the evening

i like version one but you should put your middle name and your fh full name

kartina mary
&
mark ted jones

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Posted by kissy27

I agree with Preshy...I would add your middle names so that it is a little more 'flowing'

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I agree also

it's 50 - 50!!!!!!!!!!