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Invite Wording -- Help Please

eogara Posted:

Invite Wording -- Help Please

Ok, so we have finally picked our invites () and now we have to make sure we have the wording right. Can you guys check this over for me (spelling, capitalization, grammar, etc)?

NOTE: All parents are contributing and FH's parents are divorced, dad remarried. My dad's not around, just my mom.

Ms. Patricia XXXXX, (my mom)
Ms. Sherry XXXXX, (FH's mom)
and Mr. and Mrs. David XXXXXX (FH's dad and stepmom)
request the honour of your presence
at the marriage of their children
Eileen Ann
and
Brett Evan
Sunday, the third of April
at six o'clock in the evening
The Cottage at Milleridge Inn
Jericho New York

reception immediately following
orchid24 Posted:

Re: Invite Wording -- Help Please

i would just include the year

Two thousand and five under the line with month

also, there should be a comma after Jericho

and i guess you could also capitalize 'reception' in reception following.
Marcie Posted:

Re: Invite Wording -- Help Please


Posted by orchid24

i would just include the year

Two thousand and five under the line with month

also, there should be a comma after Jericho

and i guess you could also capitalize 'reception' in reception following.



I would also include 'on' before the word Sunday.

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