invite wording- need help please

Together with their parents
brides name
and
grooms name
request the honor of your presence
in the exchange of matrimonial vows
Saturday, the twelfth of February
Two thousand and eleven
At half past two o'clock in the afternoon


does the exchange of vows sentence sound weird??

thanks!

yeah, it's weird ... how about

request the honor of your presence
as they exchange their matrimonial vows

?


mine just says:

My Parents Names
&
His Parents Names
request the pleasure of your presence
at the marriage of their children
Me
&
Him

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Posted by AwaitingAugust

yeah, it's weird ... how about

request the honor of your presence
as they exchange their matrimonial vows

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yeah, that sounds better. mine says:

Bride's name
daughther of: bride's parent's names

Groom's Name
son of: groom's parent's names

request the pleasure of your company
at their marriage

Date
Place

we worded it this way because FH are paying for the wedding ourselves, but wanted to give our parents a little shout out too

here's how mine is set up:

together with their parents
brides name
and
grooms name
request the pleasure of your company
at their marriage
on day, date
year
time

place
address
town, state

dinner and dancing to follow
black tie optional