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Invite wording opinion

springbride05 Posted:

Invite wording opinion

I need help. Does this sound right? Let me know your thoughts on what should be changed. We are adding the reception info on the bottom of our invite. Should I put Cocktail hour or Cocktails...thanks so much for any help.

It is our moment to celebrate
the love that unites us

mary
and
sean

Together with our parents,
invite you to share with us
the joyous celebration of love
when we exchange wedding vows on
Saturday, the eleventh of September
Two thousand and four
at six o’clock in the evening

Cocktail hour and Reception
immediately following
Bayview Terrace
2554 Hillside Avenue
sammi102 Posted:

Re: Invite wording opinion

I think that's perfect and wouldn't change it to 'Cocktails' I think Cocktail hour sounds better... just my opinion

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