Because you have shared in their lives by your friendship and love, Kristina Anjali xxxxxxx daughter of Mr. & Mrs. George xxxxxxx and James xx xx xxxxxxx Jr. son of Ms. Marylouise xxxxxx and Mr. & Mrs. James xx xx xxxxxxx invite you to witness their marriage Friday, the twenty sixth of June two thousand and nine at seven o'clock in the evening
FutureMrsD09
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Sounds good to me!
You could also do 'request the honor of your presence at their marriage'
FuTuRe MrS MaZz
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looks fine but i wonder about the divorced parents part... do u put the mom first or the dad? im having the same issue with my invites... finding wording that doesnt look totally bunched up
meara
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I think it is nice but I agree that that the request the honor of your presence , invite you to join them in their celebration of marriage or something more like that b/c the start part is nice and personal ' by your friendship and love' and witness seems less personal. .. but it is fine the way it is too!!
tinadansr
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thanks guys your the bestest!
I changed the 'witness their marriage' to 'request the honor of your presence at their marriage'
Hopfully with no spelling errors lol
tinadansr
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Posted by FuTuRe MrS MaZz
looks fine but i wonder about the divorced parents part... do u put the mom first or the dad? im having the same issue with my invites... finding wording that doesnt look totally bunched up
Honeslty I have no idea but I just wanted to get everyone on their so everyone would be happy!
Almostawife
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Posted by FuTuRe MrS MaZz
looks fine but i wonder about the divorced parents part... do u put the mom first or the dad? im having the same issue with my invites... finding wording that doesnt look totally bunched up
I'm putting my dad first for two reasons. He is putting more money in and second we have the same last name so people will know who is getting married.