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invite wording quick help!!!

tinadansr Posted:

invite wording quick help!!!

is this ok?

Because you have shared in their lives
by your friendship and love,
Kristina Anjali xxxxxxx
daughter of
Mr. & Mrs. George xxxxxxx
and
James xx xx xxxxxxx Jr.
son of
Ms. Marylouise xxxxxx
and
Mr. & Mrs. James xx xx xxxxxxx
invite you to witness their marriage
Friday, the twenty sixth of June two thousand and nine
at seven o'clock in the evening
FutureMrsD09 Posted:

Re: invite wording quick help!!!

Sounds good to me!

You could also do 'request the honor of your presence at their marriage'
FuTuRe MrS MaZz Posted:

Re: invite wording quick help!!!

looks fine but i wonder about the divorced parents part... do u put the mom first or the dad? im having the same issue with my invites... finding wording that doesnt look totally bunched up

meara Posted:

Re: invite wording quick help!!!

I think it is nice but I agree that that the request the honor of your presence , invite you to join them in their celebration of marriage or something more like that b/c the start part is nice and personal ' by your friendship and love' and witness seems less personal. .. but it is fine the way it is too!!

tinadansr Posted:

Re: invite wording quick help!!!

thanks guys your the bestest!

I changed the 'witness their marriage' to
'request the honor of your presence at their marriage'

Hopfully with no spelling errors lol
tinadansr Posted:

Re: invite wording quick help!!!


Posted by FuTuRe MrS MaZz

looks fine but i wonder about the divorced parents part... do u put the mom first or the dad? im having the same issue with my invites... finding wording that doesnt look totally bunched up


Honeslty I have no idea but I just wanted to get everyone on their so everyone would be happy!
Almostawife Posted:

Re: invite wording quick help!!!


Posted by FuTuRe MrS MaZz

looks fine but i wonder about the divorced parents part... do u put the mom first or the dad? im having the same issue with my invites... finding wording that doesnt look totally bunched up



I'm putting my dad first for two reasons. He is putting more money in and second we have the same last name so people will know who is getting married.

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