is this wording ok??

my mom wants her name on the invite, does this sound ok?

Mr. and Mrs. John and Emily Collins
and Mr. and Mrs. Edward and Nancy Callahan
request the honor of your presence
at the marriage of their children
Erin Lynn
and
Liam James
Thursday, the fourth of June
Two thousand and nine
at three o'clock in the afternoon
St. Gertrudes Church
Bayville, NY

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Posted by mlcvln129

Maybe eliminate the Mr. & Mrs. in front of each couple? I think seeing Mr. & Mrs. with both of their names following is a bit much.

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yeah, i was thinking the same thing...

although i think it looks a little more formal with the mr. and mrs.??

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Posted by luckiestelc

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Posted by mlcvln129

Maybe eliminate the Mr. & Mrs. in front of each couple? I think seeing Mr. & Mrs. with both of their names following is a bit much.

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yeah, i was thinking the same thing...

although i think it looks a little more formal with the mr. and mrs.??

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i wouldn't take off the Mr & Mrs. thats the formal part of the invitation

you never see both names on formal invitations, usually its Mr. and Mrs. John smith. But if she really wants it on there and means alot to her then go for it. I wanted to do the same at first but it was coming out way too long and not fitting in right.

Also i would put 'AND' in the middle of both parents names not in front of one of the parents names, unless that was a mistake so ignore this then lol

also for formal church wedding, you can use honour

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Posted by Mrs B to Be

I would only change 'and' into 'to' between you and FHs name....otherwise i think it would look great!

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i agree... i love the mr and mrs.. i just think the to rather than and makes it looks more like a joining..if that makes sense

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Posted by luckiestelc

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Posted by mlcvln129

Maybe eliminate the Mr. & Mrs. in front of each couple? I think seeing Mr. & Mrs. with both of their names following is a bit much.

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yeah, i was thinking the same thing...

although i think it looks a little more formal with the mr. and mrs.??

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Mr. and Mrs. like you have it is the standard formal. I used Mr. and Mrs. as well.

I think its fine, and modern for both women to have their names on the invitation. I would feel the same way.
Right now, I don't like it when people don't use my first name.

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Also i would put 'AND' in the middle of both parents names not in front of one of the parents names, unless that was a mistake so ignore this then lol

yes i agree maybe use along with?