on the back of my program. Can you please uncheesify it? Any suggestions appreciated!
For our Parents, We would like you to know that we truly appreciate how much you have helped us with our lives, love, and careers. You have sacrificed much to give us all of the things that have gotten us to the wonderful place that we are today. We are so glad you are able to share in our happiness on our wedding day. We love you very much.
StaceyWill
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I don't think it's cheesy at all- I think it's beautiful the way it is
little j
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For our Parents, We would like you to know that we truly appreciate how much you have helped us and sacrificed for us. Our lives, love, and careers would not be what they are without your presence and influence. We are so glad you are able to share in our happiness on our wedding day. We love you very much.
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Posted by little j
For our Parents, We would like you to know that we truly appreciate how much you have helped us and sacrificed for us. Our lives, love, and careers would not be what they are without your presence and influence. We are so glad you are able to share in our happiness on our wedding day. We love you very much.
whew SOO much better- thank you janis!!! <3<3
soontobecruz
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Def not cheesy. It's written so nicely and from the heart
vv117
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it's really sweet! this is a bit picky, but i would take out 'we would like you to know' and get right into the thick of it. to me it sounds more powerful wtihout that little introduction. JMO
For our Parents, We truly appreciate how much you have helped us and sacrificed for us. Our lives, love, and careers would not be what they are without your presence and influence. We are so glad you are able to share in our happiness on our wedding day. We love you very much.
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i dont think its cheesy at all...but here is what we used f u want another suggestion..
we would like to thank everyone here today for being a part of our special day esp our parents who without their love,we would not be here clebrating ours.we would also ike to thank al our friends and family for not only making this day but al our days memorable ones.we love you
then we had our fav dr.suess quote..you know your in love whn you can't fall asleep because eality is finally better than your dreams'
