My DIY Menu - need opinions

My 'theme' is ivory and brown and I felt creative tonight.
What do we think???????? Thanks!!!!!!

wow those look professional.

great job!

looks great -- beautiful fonts and layout

im being critical but:

tomato is spelled wrong
apricot is plural but cucumber and tomato are not
i would move 'with a' down to the same line as vinaigrette (and put 'with a....' on the last line for each' -- just a personal preference
entrees should not have a '
individual cakeS
i dont know what frisee is, but if it's chicken frisee and that is the name, i'd move it up one line

Beautiful! They look like they were professionally done!

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Posted by bluegreen08

looks great

im being critical but:

tomato is spelled wrong
apricot is plural but cucumber and tomato are not
i would move 'with a' down to the same line as vinaigrette
entrees should not have a '

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NO! Please be critical - thank you!!!!! I've been staring at this thing for hours along with working on some photos so I'm a little shot

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Posted by lorimari

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Posted by bluegreen08

looks great

im being critical but:

tomato is spelled wrong
apricot is plural but cucumber and tomato are not
i would move 'with a' down to the same line as vinaigrette
entrees should not have a '

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NO! Please be critical - thank you!!!!! I've been staring at this thing for hours along with working on some photos so I'm a little shot

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i have an eye for this kind of stuff

i added a few more things to my orig post, but it really does look great!

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Posted by bluegreen08

looks great -- beautiful fonts and layout

im being critical but:

tomato is spelled wrong
apricot is plural but cucumber and tomato are not
i would move 'with a' down to the same line as vinaigrette (and put 'with a....' on the last line for each' -- just a personal preference
entrees should not have a '
individual cakeS
i dont know what frisee is, but if it's chicken frisee and that is the name, i'd move it up one line

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I don't know what frisee is either but on the menu online it was on the next line so I just copied it as it was written out on their menu.

Thanks again for your help - I would have printed them and had all those mistakes!!!!!!

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Posted by Annoulak

that's so pretty!! do you design such things for a living?

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Sort of
I'm actually a 'photograher' so I know how to do this stuff b/c I've done birth announcements and such for clients.

I was just taking a break from some photos from a session, was feeling creative. Plus this whole 'vow renewal/5 year celebration' is a surprise for my hubby so I have to do everything while he's either asleep or at work

looks yummy to me

they are fabulously designed...


how are you printing them?

I think they are absolutely beautiful. Of course I missed the 5 year celebration line on the menu and saw your date as 11/8/03 and was sooo confused but it's early. and Monday.

congratulations on 5 years. I was in a friends wedding on 11/9/03 and I have to say it doesn't feel like it was 5 years ago at all.

I think you have a great name!

The menu is gorgeous and professional!!!