the calligrapher wants the wording has to be as brief as possible, so i've cut it down to what i think is the bare minimum.
what do you think about the descriptions?
how do you like the main dish description in caps, with the starches/veggies description in lowercase?
'chocolate, chocolate, and more chocolate' refers to the chocolate fountain. cheesy or cute?
any other suggestions?
Menu May 28, 2005
Caesar Salad
Portabella Sorrentino
Bourbon Marinated Filet Mignon bleu cheese potatoes and asparagus bundles
Chilean Sea Bass beurre blanc sauce and orange risotto
Mesquite Grilled French Breast of Chicken garlic mashed potatoes and green bean bundles
Wild Mushroom Torte le roule cheese in a whole wheat crust
Wedding Cake
Chocolate, Chocolate, and More Chocolate
jimmysgrl
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Hmmmmm, I like the wording of the menu. I'm not sure about the chocolate, I guess it just depends on the look of the menu. But I like it, my mouth is already watering!
103005FallBride
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All I can say is YUM!!!
adioguardi
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All I can say is YUM!!!
MMMMMMMMMMM Ditto!!
jcdesignz
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i think it is straight and to the point - i wonder though if you should just write chocolate fountain , rather than chocolate, chocolate and more chocolate
lol; - some people are slow and may not get it.....
Bunnymonkey
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I like the idea of the entree title in caps, and then the desciption in lower case. I think it looks fantastic, and the 'chocolate' line is fun - everyone will know what it is once they see it, no need to explain all formally.
o17range
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YUM YUM YUM! Sounds great. Oh yeah, and as for your actual QUESTIONS...I like how you differentiated the 2 lines of each entree...and that the chocolate chocolate chocolate will be undersood as soon as the fountain comes out!
KimberlyBride
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Looks yummy. I think you should write chocolate fountain maybe with chocolate, chocolate, chocolate underneath? Most people won't know what chocolate, chocolate, chocolate means. But other then that looks AWESOME!
butterfl2878
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AlexLynn, doesn't the VM include menus on the table?
jesslangen
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Posted by jcdesignz
i think it is straight and to the point - i wonder though if you should just write chocolate fountain , rather than chocolate, chocolate and more chocolate
lol; - some people are slow and may not get it.....
Im one of those 'slow' people...I wouldn't get it
alexlynn7
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AlexLynn, doesn't the VM include menus on the table?
yes... but i wanted to have my own made up by the calligrapher who did my invites. i'm anal about everything matching, even though i recognize that absolutely no one will notice except me
germai68
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I like the wording, however I don't like the idea of one line in caps and one in lowercase. If it were me I would say all one way or the other. And the chocolate, chocolate chocolate, I don't know if anyone will get it. I mentioned the chocolate fountain to my aunt and even saying 'chocolate fountain' she still had no idea what I was talking about. I think it is a new thing for weddings and most older family members will have no idea. But these are JMO.
BlondeJD
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Hey Alex -- I think it looks good. The only thing I would do is add your names to the top of the menu. For the price you pay for customized menus, you want to make sure people know that they're customized and not from the hall JMO
attn2details
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Hey Alex
I think it looks great overall - but in my opinion everything should be capitalized properly - you can have your calligrapher write the description either smaller or in a different font - And I also ditto the YUUUMMMM!!!!!!
