My sample invites!

Okay, ladies ... so I made these myself so please tell me if there is anyhing I should change. The invite says:

JUST LIKE A PAGE OUT OT A FAIRY TALE
THE STORYBOOK ROMANCE COMES TRUE…

our names

TOGETHER WITH OUR PARENTS
REQUEST THE HONOUR OF YOUR PRESENCE
AT OUR WEDDING CELEBRATION

FRIDAY, THE THIRD OF JULY
TWO THOUSAND AND NINE
AT SIX THIRTY IN THE EVENING

LEONARD’S OF GREAT NECK
555 NORTHERN BOULEVARD
GREAT NECK, NEW YORK

RECEPTION IMMEDIATELY TO FOLLOW


Does that sound good? I also embossed the pic, but can you see it? I am not sure if its worth doing on the invites if you cant see it.

what do you think??? More pics in my album