MY STD PROOF NEW QUESTION edited proof

dangell427 Posted: Sep 27, 2007 05:52 PM

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i think it looks great! i love the pic too!

davenjess Posted: Sep 27, 2007 05:55 PM

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I would remove the IN. Make it a period after the date & just the town & city name on the next line...

LOVE IT!!!

Collweenie21 Posted: Sep 27, 2007 05:57 PM

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Looks great! I too agree just put Rockville Centre, NY on one line. I wouldn't abbreviate it to RVC.

jgl Posted: Sep 27, 2007 05:59 PM

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Posted by dangell427

i think it looks great! i love the pic too!

thank you its my favorite!!!

jgl Posted: Sep 27, 2007 06:00 PM

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Posted by davenjess

I would remove the IN. Make it a period after the date & just the town & city name on the next line...

LOVE IT!!!

thanks Jess

I think i just might delete it all together

it doesnt look like it will fit even if i remove the period and if i delete it i can put some spaces between lines

kimNanthony Posted: Sep 27, 2007 06:07 PM

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What if you did Long Island, New York?

chrispar Posted: Sep 27, 2007 06:14 PM

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It looks great! I agree with RVC and NY being on the same line

jgl Posted: Sep 27, 2007 07:15 PM

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Posted by chrispar

It looks great! I agree with RVC and NY being on the same line

thanks!!!

Soon2BMrsD Posted: Sep 27, 2007 07:17 PM

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gina i love it!!! very nice!

jgl Posted: Sep 27, 2007 07:18 PM

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Posted by Soon2BMrsD

gina i love it!!! very nice!

thanks meg!

rahana316 Posted: Sep 27, 2007 07:18 PM

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I think it look beautiful. You dont need to make changes to it.

november152008 Posted: Sep 27, 2007 07:21 PM

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it looks really nice

dream426 Posted: Sep 27, 2007 07:26 PM

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I love it. It came out great. I would take out the in also. Just have it Rockville Centre, NY

jgl Posted: Sep 27, 2007 07:27 PM

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Posted by dream426

I love it. It came out great. I would take out the in also. Just have it Rockville Centre, NY

thanks GIna

yelley77 Posted: Sep 27, 2007 08:16 PM

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I LOVE it... it's so simple and pretty!!!

Mrs. V 2008 Posted: Sep 27, 2007 10:44 PM

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oooo i love it! love the pic you choose!!!

jgl Posted: Sep 27, 2007 10:56 PM

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Posted by Bride 2 Be

oooo i love it! love the pic you choose!!!

aww thank you so much!!!

Ana and Darryl Posted: Sep 27, 2007 11:01 PM

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They are very Nice i wouldn't change anything. The picture is the main focus and I think the text is nice and simple. Maybe the only suggestion would be what was previously mentioned about the location abbreviation. Other than that its perfect.