need help!

i am trying to come up with a cute invitation wording for the after-wedding brunch. i was thinking it could rhyme - but i s*ck at poems! anyone have any ideas?

this was my half-a$$ed attempt which i know is terrible, but it gives you the idea of what i am looking for...

After our wedding
But before we go away
We would love to celebrate
With you one more day!

Please join us for an after-wedding bruncheon
Monday, October 8th, 2007
1:00pm
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please help! i am sooo not creative!

I really like its very cute!!!

I think that's cute, and would like to steal it for my own brunch, if you don't mind!
How are you handling this? Are you sending actual invites? I was thinking about putting them in the OOT bags, but what if people didn't open them until the morning after the wedding???

I think its cute!!!!
We are doing a breakfast the morning after too.
We put in the invitiations a card with all that info about the breakfast.

I think it is cute too...........you did a good job!!!!

I think what you wrote is really cute!

you are all too nice i might change it up a little, like:

After our wedding is over
But before we go away
We would love to continue the party
And celebrate with you one more day!


either way, we will be sending them in with our wedding invites to OOT family and the BP -we are trying to keep it small, and my mom is having it catered, so she wants a # when we get the invites back.

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Posted by Pinkiegirll07

I think that's cute, and would like to steal it for my own brunch, if you don't mind!
How are you handling this? Are you sending actual invites? I was thinking about putting them in the OOT bags, but what if people didn't open them until the morning after the wedding???

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will the OOT bags be given at the front desk when people check in or will they already be in the room? i got one when i checked in and there was a card attached to the front of the bag (that you couldn't miss) with a little saying thanking you for making it to the wedding and then said there would be a brunch the following morning in the hotel. that is one way to do it.

i'm sure most people would look in the bags b/c they are curious as to what you put inside! otherwise, send them in the actual invitation.

BTW...the poem is very cute!!