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Need help on wording hotel info in invitations...

Annieb Posted:

Need help on wording hotel info in invitations...

This is what I have so far but I am not sure I like it...what do you think? How did you word yours? THANK YOU!!!

Hotel Information:

Rooms Have Been Reserved At:

Oheka Castle
135 West Gate Drive
Huntington, New York 11743
(631)692-2707
www.oheka.com

The Melville Mariott
(10 minute drive from Oheka Castle)
1350 Old Walt Whitman Road
Melville, New York 11747
(631) 423-1600

When making reservations please mention the “XXXXXXXXXX Wedding' for a special rate

All reservations must be made at least four weeks in advance
franksbride Posted:

Re: Need help on wording hotel info in invitations...

What's not to like...sounds fine to me.

alina Posted:

Re: Need help on wording hotel info in invitations...

This is what I have so far but I am not sure I like it...what do you think? How did you word yours? THANK YOU!!!

Hotel Information:
Here is what I would change:

Rooms Have Been blocked at:

Oheka Castle
135 West Gate Drive
Huntington, New York 11743
(631)692-2707
www.oheka.com

The Melville Mariott
(10 minute drive from Oheka Castle)
1350 Old Walt Whitman Road
Melville, New York 11747
(631) 423-1600

When making reservations please mention the “XXXXXXXXXX Wedding' for a special rate

All reservations must be made at least four weeks in advance in order to receive the special rate
Annieb Posted:

Re: Need help on wording hotel info in invitations...

Alina...I LIKE IT!!! THanks...but, any alternatives to the word 'blocked'? THANKS

itsbouttime Posted:

Re: Need help on wording hotel info in invitations...

what about rooms are being 'held' ???

tootsie Posted:

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Room are available at a block rate sounds best...IMO

Annieb Posted:

Re: Need help on wording hotel info in invitations...

what if i just put hotel information: and then the hotels and leave out the line 'Rooms have been reserved at'???
would that work?
THANKS AGAIN
alina Posted:

Re: Need help on wording hotel info in invitations...

I don't know of alternatives to blocked, but I wouldn't use the word 'reserved' unless you actually reserved the rooms

2UNTAMED Posted:

Re: Need help on wording hotel info in invitations...

I am also getting married at Oheka and this is the wording I used:

Luxtury Rooms and Exquiste Suites are avaliable for the upcoming wedding of XXXXXXXX and XXXXXXX

Please call the Oheka Castle directly for reservations and information.

I did not block any rooms, so I did not use the word blocked.
I hope this helps you.

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