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NEED HELP ORDERING TONIGHT!

SOTHISISLOVE53109 Posted:

NEED HELP ORDERING TONIGHT!

Please help! I'm ordering my invitations tonight and
I'm stuck on the wording:

Our cocktail hour / reception doesn't start
immediately following ceremony there is a little bit
of a time gap so which is the proper way?

Please Join Us For
An Enchanted Evening
of Dining and Dancing
Westbury Manor
Six Thirty to Eleven Thirty

or

The Celebration Continues
with a special evening of
Dining and Dancing
Westbury Manor
Cocktail Hour Begins at Six Thirty in the evening

Help How do I word this?
TIA


Also what are you girls using for the response saying?
mlcvln129 Posted:

Re: NEED HELP ORDERING TONIGHT!

I don't even think I would write 'cocktail hour' in the invitation. 6:30 pm implies that this is the time that the cocktail hour starts.

I like the second wording, IMO.
SOTHISISLOVE53109 Posted:

Re: NEED HELP ORDERING TONIGHT!

so just write:

Westbury Manor
Six Thirty

Any help would be great!
Riag24 Posted:

Re: NEED HELP ORDERING TONIGHT!

I am keeping it simple


Please join us for a night of dinner, drinks, and dancing
Beginning at half past seven in the evening

Venetian Yacht Club
494 Fire Island Avenue
Village of Babylon, NY

Formal Attire

RSVP

Kindly Reply By May 1st, 2009

M _________________
____Accepts with pleasure
____Guest(s) Attending
____Declines with regret






vnv126 Posted:

Re: NEED HELP ORDERING TONIGHT!

I like the second one
but I don't think you should put cocktail hour
just put half past six in the evening of your wedding date

at your wedding location. IMO
gina409 Posted:

Re: NEED HELP ORDERING TONIGHT!


Posted by vnv126

I like the second one
but I don't think you should put cocktail hour
just put half past six in the evening of your wedding date

at your wedding location. IMO



ita!

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