Need Help - please proof my invitation wording...

TRC
and
EDC
together with their parents
request the honour of your presence
at their marriage
on Saturday, the sixth of November
Two thousand and Ten
at ten-thirty in the morning
St. Nicholas Greek Orthodox Church
196-10 Northern Boulevard
Flushing, New York


Reception
at twelve thirty in the afternoon
Woodbury Country Club
884 Jericho Turnpike
Woodbury, New York

eta: start time

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Posted by rosiegirl565

TRC
and
EDC
together with their parents
request the honour of your presence
at their marriage
on Saturday, the sixth of November
Two thousand and Ten
at ten-thirty in the morning
St. Nicholas Greek Orthodox Church
196-10 Northern Boulevard
Flushing, New York


Reception
immediately following ceremony
Woodbury Country Club
884 Jericho Turnpike
Woodbury, New York

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looks good but you don't need the address of the church on the invite if you are including a directional card. You can just put Flushing, NY

also ten-thirty should be capitalized I believe and also Sixth of Nov.

i could be wrong, but doesn't it go.......

'together with their families

ABC
and
123

request the honour of your presence.......
etc etc