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need help with grammar..UPDATE...

Summertimegal424 Posted:

need help with grammar..UPDATE...

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okay can everyone proof-read....make sure i have capitals were there suppose to...and periods too


thanks girls
Summertimegal424 Posted:

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c'mon give it to me...lol

thats what liw is for...see this is normal lol
sharvin09 Posted:

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I though it sounded great, what's wrong with it?

Im a Pepper Posted:

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i actually love the poem, i think it's so cute!

Summertimegal424 Posted:

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i dont know the first part...our day is quicking approaching and we just cant wait...i dont know..maybe i've said it to many times in my head to make me go nuts

Im a Pepper Posted:

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no, i don't think there's anything wrong with it. it's such a cute STD

Summertimegal424 Posted:

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do u think its gay that i will have a magnet too? or is that fine?

Im a Pepper Posted:

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absolutely not gay. i think people will love it. i actually like getting STD magnets. i don't know why but i have a thing with magnets on the fridge - i love them lol
lanamanitta Posted:

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I think it's fine to have both!!! I'm putting a little card in also . . . .

How about

Our day is fast approaching, and we just can't wait,
So we've sent you this magnet so you'll Save the Date!!!!

Put it on the fridge,
put it on the toaster,
and if you don't like magnets,
use it as a coaster . . .

( -- kidding on the second verse!!!!!)
Jayla127 Posted:

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I don't see anything wrong with it
cedesnyc Posted:

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It sounds fine...

Since you want suggestions...what about this
I inserted the suggestion in bold

Our day is quickly approaching and we just can't wait! we hope you can be there, TO SHARE OUR SPECIAL DAY or SO PLACE THIS MAGNET IN A SAFE PLACE.
Save the date.......
tinadansr Posted:

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how about our day is fast approaching and we can't hardly wait, so stick this magnet on your fridge and kindly save the date???

tinadansr Posted:

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Posted by lanamanitta

I think it's fine to have both!!! I'm putting a little card in also . . . .

How about

Our day is fast approaching, and we just can't wait,
So we've sent you this magnet so you'll Save the Date!!!!

Put it on the fridge,
put it on the toaster,
and if you don't like magnets,
use it as a coaster . . .

( -- kidding on the second verse!!!!!)



i wanna send that so bad!
Summertimegal424 Posted:

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new task..

tia

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