**Need Help With Invite Wording**

Please tell me if this sounds right!

Brides Name

and

Grooms Name

request the honor of your presence
as they exchange wedding vows


Thursday The First of July
(does this sound right?) should their be a comma atter thursday,

Two Thousand And Ten
At Half Past Five In the Evening

Venue Address

RECEPTION TO IMMEDIATELY FOLLOW

(Is the cocktail hr suppose to be mentioned)

Thanks Ladies

cocktail hour does not get mention
not sure about the comma though I don't think so though...

Are you getting married at a house of worship or the RH? If RH, 'request the pleasure of your company' and not 'honor of your presence'.

Yes, I think I would put a comma after Thursday....

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Posted by rdubs

Are you getting married at a house of worship or the RH? If RH, 'request the pleasure of your company' and not 'honor of your presence'.

Yes, I would be a comma after Thursday....

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The ceremony is at the RH

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Posted by Jayla127

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Posted by rdubs

Are you getting married at a house of worship or the RH? If RH, 'request the pleasure of your company' and not 'honor of your presence'.

Yes, I would be a comma after Thursday....

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The ceremony is at the RH

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This is what another bride told me recently since I'm also getting married at FH (thanks Melanie!) and I also read it in etiquette book...

Yes, it should say 'pleasure of your company' if it's at the RH. No comma after Thursday. As for CH, mine says:

Please join us for cocktails beginning at half past seven o'clock in the evening with a reception immediately to follow.

Comma after thursday. and 2010 is Two Thousand Ten

I don't think there is an & in there....

no mention of CH