Need help with one line in my invitation...

Need help with one line in my invitation...

hi girls...
i'm trying to finalize the wording on our invites...and i'm stuck with one line...

should we say:
'This celebration of love will BE ON'
(date, etc..)

OR

'This celebration of love will TAKE PLACE ON'
(date,etc...)

thanks!!!!

Re: Need help with one line in my invitation...

I think #2

Re: Need help with one line in my invitation...

IMO, 'This celebration of love will TAKE PLACE ON' sounds better.

Re: Need help with one line in my invitation...

I like 'take place on'.

Re: Need help with one line in my invitation...

Take place on!

Re: Need help with one line in my invitation...

i think #2 sounds nicer also...thanks girls!!!

(but is it gramatically correct???) ahhhh....the stress i cause myself!!!

Re: Need help with one line in my invitation...

#2 - sounds perfect!!!!!!!!

Re: Need help with one line in my invitation...

definately #2

Re: Need help with one line in my invitation...

'take place on' sounds more formal. i like it!!

Re: Need help with one line in my invitation...

I like 'will take place'