NEED HELP WITH WRITING POEM FOR MOH SPEECH

I am in the process of writing my moh speech. I created a poem but I need opinions as to whether how good it is. Does anyone think I should chang it? All advice and suggestions are much appreciated.

Today begins the rest of your lives as one
Your journey is just beginning
My wish for the both of you
Is that life becomes all that you want it to be
I hope your dreams stay big and your worries stay small
I hope the days come easy and the loving moments pass slow
And each road leads you to where you want to go
My last wish is for your love for each other to deepen and grow
And years from now you will to look back and remember the traveled road
Never forget the love that brought you together
Because in the end it that is all that matters

absolutely!

I think it is really good the way it is! But I couldn't sleep and was bored lol and started playing around with it a little because I love rhyming words

Today starts the rest of your lives as one
Your joyful journey has just begun
My first wish for the both of you
Is that all of your hopes and dreams come true
I hope your dreams stay big and your worries stay small
Every obstacle you face may you together stand tall,
I hope the days come easy and the loving moments pass slow
And each road leads you to where you want to go
My last wish is with each day your love deepen and grow
And years from now you will look back and remember the traveled road
Never forget the love that brought you two together
Because in the end that is all that truly matters, Love always and forever.