need opinion on Groomsman card

So i couldn't really find anything for a will you be my groomsman card. I made the cards myself but needed something to put down as the inside text. FH didn't want you write individual things cause he didn't know what to say.. he's not always good with telling people how he feels.. but i wanted to give them the cards at the engagement party cause i thought it would be nice.. so he asked me to think of something to write in each card... so i put this together and wanted to get some opinions on it.. so what do you think.. honest opinions please! TIA


We’d be so honored to have you join
our very special day.
You’re role as groomsman will be important
in many different ways
You’ll have to dress your very best
On our wedding date,
And Throw the groom a party,
but don’t stay out too late!
Have some beers and Have some laughs,
Take some photos too,
Cause this day could never be as speical
If it didn’t include you!!!

Will you be a groomsman?

That's a really cute idea. I like the poem a lot!!

Good Job!

THANKS! i started typing and it just sort of came out..lol. I figured a poem would be easy cause FH wouldn't have to write something sappy to each guy and they wouldn't have to do the guy hug thing at the eparty and be all uncomfortable..lol. I wanted to keep it fun but yet still show them how special it will be to have them be a part of our bridal party. I hope they like them! i actually just finished my cards.. here are some pics...ti'm gonna try to put the rest in my album..

i hope they like em.. i made each one a little different for each person...
BM cards


Groomsman cards..



Inside GM cards


Inside BM cards


ETA: pics

very very cute!

You did an awesome job on everything. I love the poems and the cards. They look great!!

Thanks girls It makes me very happy to know other people think it came out ok!!