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Need Wording Help!

DGoldfarb0776 Posted:

Need Wording Help!

My FFIL and FMIL are going to be giving every room that was blocked a $60 credit on their bill so that they can eat at the hotel rather than have to spend $$ of their own to eat dinner on Saturday night.

I wanted to put this infomation on the OOT box letter than I am attaching to the boxes and I am having problems wording it.. can anyone help me?

I want to make sure that FH's parents get credit for their generosity.
mathteach Posted:

Re: Need Wording Help!

To make your stay more pleasant Mr. and Mrs. FH have arranged for each room to have a $60 credit. It is their sincere hope that you use this credit in the hotel's restaurant (name?) so that you may have a relaxing meal without worrying about finding your way around town.

DGoldfarb0776 Posted:

Re: Need Wording Help!


Posted by mathteach

To make your stay more pleasant Mr. and Mrs. FH have arranged for each room to have a $60 credit. It is their sincere hope that you use this credit in the hotel's restaurant (name?) so that you may have a relaxing meal without worrying about finding your way around town.



OMG thank you!! I had such a brain fart on that one it was hellish...

mathteach Posted:

Re: Need Wording Help!


Posted by DGoldfarb0776


Posted by mathteach

To make your stay more pleasant Mr. and Mrs. FH have arranged for each room to have a $60 credit. It is their sincere hope that you use this credit in the hotel's restaurant (name?) so that you may have a relaxing meal without worrying about finding your way around town.



OMG thank you!! I had such a brain fart on that one it was hellish...




I hate those....
DGoldfarb0776 Posted:

Re: Need Wording Help!


Posted by mathteach


Posted by DGoldfarb0776


Posted by mathteach

To make your stay more pleasant Mr. and Mrs. FH have arranged for each room to have a $60 credit. It is their sincere hope that you use this credit in the hotel's restaurant (name?) so that you may have a relaxing meal without worrying about finding your way around town.



OMG thank you!! I had such a brain fart on that one it was hellish...




I hate those....



I know I was like I want to say this but not sure (I didn't want to take credit that FH and I are not the ones paying for their meal on Saturday night...

Here's what I got out of it for my little note to go on the boxes:


We are glad you chose to stay and help celebrate our wedding day! Here are some goodies for you to eat, to help make your stay a little sweeter!
Just some small tokens full of our love, hugs, and kisses, to say thanks for the trip you have made to see the new Mr. & Mrs.!
All Our Love,
Gary & Danielle

Wedding Notes:

To make your stay more pleasant, Mr. & Mrs. Joseph Bedrick have arranged for each room to have a $60.00 credit. It is their sincere hope that you use this credit in the hotel's restaurant, Mediterranean Grill so that you may have a relaxing meal Saturday evening without worrying about finding your way around town.

Transportation To/From Wedding Venue
for Sunday, March 9, 2008

Transportation has been arranged for the convenience of our out of town guests to leave the Fairfield Inn/JFK promptly at 10:45am and be transported to Russo’s on the Bay for the wedding festivities.
Following the end of the wedding festivities, transportation has been arranged for our out of town guests to escorted back at the Fairfield Inn/JFK promptly at 5:30pm.


Hope it sounds okay and I put a nice heart boarder on the page as well to match our boxes.

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