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#1 sounds more formal
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I like #1 - it flows much better
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I like #1 - sounds more formal.
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#1-less clunky
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#1. The 'at which' part in the second one throws things off a bit, IMO.
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Thanks Wendy, I was thinking the same after everyone starting picking #1