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Need wording opinion

xjulietx Posted:

Need wording opinion

There are two wording choices that are almost the same and some people may not notice the difference but I need your opinions.

#1 Mr. and Mrs. Bride's Parents
and
Mr. and Mrs. Groom's Parents
request the honour of your presence
at the Nuptial Mass uniting their children

Bride

and

Groom

in the Sacrament of Holy Matrimony

details, details, details


or


#2


Mr. and Mrs. Bride's Parents

and

Mr. and Mrs. Groom's Parents

request the honour of your presence
at the Nuptial Mass at which their children


Bride


and


Groom


will be united in the Sacrament of Holy Matrimony


details details details.




Such a slight difference, but I don't know
september2004 Posted:

Re: Need wording opinion

#1 sounds more formal

jessicae129 Posted:

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I like #1 - it flows much better

May2004 Posted:

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I like #1 - sounds more formal.

neesiepie Posted:

Re: Need wording opinion

numeral uno
tourist Posted:

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#1-less clunky

wenndypoo Posted:

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#1. The 'at which' part in the second one throws things off a bit, IMO.

xjulietx Posted:

Re: Need wording opinion

Thanks Wendy, I was thinking the same after everyone starting picking #1

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