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need your opinions asap

Summertimegal424 Posted:

need your opinions asap

just about to place the order...can i ask for a grammar check or anything that looks wrong?

these are my favor cards they are front and back


MrsJuneB2B Posted:

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aww, i love it.

only thing i would suggest, is can you make the picture on the other side a little lighter (just a little)... so you can read the whole write-up on the back a bit easier.... i can't tell on the computer if in person it's easier to read. but i absolutely LOVE how it looks and think it's such a sweet idea! i love all the colors and everything too :o) great job!
Summertimegal424 Posted:

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Posted by MrsJuneB2B

aww, i love it.

only thing i would suggest, is can you make the picture on the other side a little lighter (just a little)... so you can read the whole write-up on the back a bit easier.... i can't tell on the computer if in person it's easier to read. but i absolutely LOVE how it looks and think it's such a sweet idea! i love all the colors and everything too :o) great job!



i know what ur saying...i think that it will look okay printed big..cause when i see it it looks awesome..but on this small screen i see what ur saying..i would like to mute it a little tho!
coldasice217 Posted:

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Gramatically it looks correct to me, but honestly I couldn't read the back to proof it, I think the pic will need to be scaled back to 25-40% tint in my semi-professional opinion lol.

littlepixie12 Posted:

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I have to agree the picture in the back makes it hard to read the print there ... maybe you can make it a watermark?

edt to add: also I think it sounds funny to say a dear friend, considered family... maye you should just leave it at a dear freind whom we love very much or just a dear friend, IMHO
dazies1011 Posted:

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Love it Colleen but, the back is alittle hard to read.

Summertimegal424 Posted:

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Posted by littlepixie12

I have to agree the picture in the back makes it hard to read the print there ... maybe you can make it a watermark?

edt to add: also I think it sounds funny to say a dear friend, considered family... maye you should just leave it at a dear freind whom we love very much or just a dear friend, IMHO



yeah if it were any other person i would do that. lol it was always a joke with her that she wasn't family!
geegee827 Posted:

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you don't need the ',' between Adventure and for

Gramatically, it should read:

....to Camp Adventure for a child

However, I think I would change that to:

....to Camp Adventure so a child

Other than that - it looks great.
ddnsp618 Posted:

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Posted by Summertimegal424

is this better?



i would take out the 'had' in 'had volunterred'
Summertimegal424 Posted:

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Posted by ddnsp618


Posted by Summertimegal424

is this better?



i would take out the 'had' in 'had volunterred'



good catch
dazies1011 Posted:

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Posted by Summertimegal424

is this better?

Yes
donnasmom09 Posted:

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Awww, Colleen!!!! What a wonderful idea!!!!!! Mary MOB
GT143EA Posted:

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What a nice thing to do Colleen! It looks great!

gina409 Posted:

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such a nice thing of u to do...looks great

tinadansr Posted:

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thats awesome Coll
Sweeteey51 Posted:

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I love it, i just cant read the words on the second picture. You should do a washout of the pic.

lanamanitta Posted:

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No comma after Camp Adventure. Otherwise, awesome, and how nice.

mlcvln129 Posted:

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I think I would still lighten up the picture in the back more. . .maybe it's because my eyesight is such crap to begin with, but I'm STILL having trouble reading it.

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