OK creative Cats help me out with this poem....

OK girls we are having a bachelorette and bachelor party combine a Jack and Jill I tried to find a cute poem or invite and nothing so i got creative and started writting my own:

But now IM stuck please help!

We are going out dancing and renting a bus we are having a pre party before at our house....... I think it will start at 7 bus comes at 9.


Poem

Only a short time left to mix and mingle
Jackie and Adam will no longer be single

Ladies & Gentlemen are invited to come
For one last night of single fun

These two have so much excitement they can't hide
So join us March 14, 2009 for a real wild ride

Raise your glass high and toast to us
Don't worry about driving we rented a bus



errr I got brain freeze!

jacki and adam r saying goodbye
to the single life,but dont u cry

its time to party with all our friends
were not sure what time it will end

so before we take that very big step
come out for a drink u wont regret

i can think of some more if u like

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Posted by JamieAnt06202009

I love it!! It really came out so good. The only thing I would change is the cannot to can't.

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good catch I changed it!

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Posted by Brat23

OK girls we are having a bachelorette and bachelor party combine a Jack and Jill I tried to find a cute poem or invite and nothing so i got creative and started writting my own:

But now IM stuck please help!

We are going out dancing and renting a bus we are having a pre party before at our house....... I think it will start at 7 bus comes at 9.


Poem

Only a short time left to mix and mingle
Jackie and Adam will no longer be single

Ladies & Gentlemen are invited to come
For one last night of single fun

These two have so much excitement they can't hide
So join us March 14, 2009 for a real wild ride

Raise your glass high and toast to us
Don't worry about driving we rented a bus



errr I got brain freeze!

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'Cuz one guarantee, by the time this night's over
None of us are going to be sober!

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Posted by gina409

jacki and adam r saying goodbye
to the single life,but dont u cry

its time to party with all our friends
were not sure what time it will end

so before we take that very big step
come out for a drink u wont regret

i can think of some more if u like

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Gina I love it your a poetic geinus! LOL you did that in like 2 minutes mine took me 2 hours LOL

Yes definitely bring on more!

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Posted by coldasice217

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Posted by Brat23

OK girls we are having a bachelorette and bachelor party combine a Jack and Jill I tried to find a cute poem or invite and nothing so i got creative and started writting my own:

But now IM stuck please help!

We are going out dancing and renting a bus we are having a pre party before at our house....... I think it will start at 7 bus comes at 9.


Poem

Only a short time left to mix and mingle
Jackie and Adam will no longer be single

Ladies & Gentlemen are invited to come
For one last night of single fun

These two have so much excitement they can't hide
So join us March 14, 2009 for a real wild ride

Raise your glass high and toast to us
Don't worry about driving we rented a bus



errr I got brain freeze!

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'Cuz one guarantee, by the time this night's over
None of us are going to be sober!

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Thats good too LOL

before the big day is almost here
come out with us and have a beer

no need to drive the rides on us
we got an awesome party bus

so come out n celebrate a party for two
what else could be better to do

ok 1 more unless u want more i dont mind..

adam and jackie are tying the knot
but before the wedding we must make a stop

a great celebration for u to enjoy
her n the girls,him n the boys

dont worry bout driving we got it all done
so come share in a great night of fun

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Posted by gina409

ok 1 more unless u want more i dont mind..

adam and jackie are tying the knot
but before the wedding we must make a stop

a great celebration for u to enjoy
her n the girls,him n the boys

dont worry bout driving we got it all done
so come share in a great night of fun

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Gina I am peein' I love them all so cute you are!

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Posted by AlisonMZ14

Thats so great i'm having jack n jill also thanks for the idea!

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No problem apparently Gina is a creative genius!