OK!! Here's another one.....(PLEASE HELP!)

xxpazzaxx Posted: Nov 23, 2009 10:18 PM

OK!! Here's another one.....(PLEASE HELP!)

Sorry to bother you girls!!
What's proper for a bridal shower invite....(I don't have too many lines to work with so I had to combine it)

Given with love by her mom at Giardino Restaurant, Douglaston, NY

or...

Given with love by her mom at Giardino Restaurant in Douglaston, NY

the rest of the invite reads as follows:
We're showering her with love and kisses
Just before she becomes 'Shawn's Mrs.'
Please join us for a Bridal Shower in honor of Alissa ***
On Saturday, March 27th at Noon

julesrbf Posted: Nov 23, 2009 10:21 PM

Re: OK!! Here's another one.....(PLEASE HELP!)

I would go with the first one personally but I think both are fine. Though I would put your mom's name instead of 'her mom' - I don't know if you did that just because you were posting it online and didn't want to use her name - but on mine they wrote 'given with love by Mom Smith' (with her name) ... make sense?

Just my opinion! HTH!

cavvento Posted: Nov 23, 2009 10:23 PM

Re: OK!! Here's another one.....(PLEASE HELP!)

I think that either way is fine. If you say it out loud, the first way sounds better. But if you look at it, the 2 commas on either side of Douglaston might be too much. I would probably go with the line that says 'in' unless you're able to spell out the word New York

springsandra Posted: Nov 24, 2009 08:45 AM

Re: OK!! Here's another one.....(PLEASE HELP!)

Are you having a separate RSVP card or direction card? You might not have to worry about all that then. You could just say please respond to the hostess, NAME, at # and the direction card would take care of the location.

But either way looks fine if you do have the room for the whole line on there!

BTW: I love that place!!!!!!!!!!!