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OOT box poem

magbride Posted:

OOT box poem

So I wrote a little poem that goes along with some of the stuff in the OOT boxes. I put in parentheses what the 'treat' is for you guys, but not for the real deal. What do you think?

An apple a day might not keep the hangover away, (apples)
But two Advil will do the trick, we say. (advils)
Don’t forget to hydrate and drink your water, (water bottles)
If you’re feeling sluggish tomorrow,
An energy drink might be just what the doctor would order. (emergen-c energy booster packets)
If you’ve danced up an appetite,
Have a snack or two. (chips/pretzels)
But save room for breakfast,
At 10:30, we’ll be waiting for you!

Hugs and kisses, (Hershey kisses and hugs)
Colette Posted:

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Hey Magbride, this is a VERY cute way to list your oot stuff!!! are you up for some quick edits with the meter? I made a few here, use any you like, or you know, ignore me...

An apple a day keeps the doctor away? (apples)
Two Advil will do the trick, we say! (advils)

Don’t forget to hydrate and drink your water, (water bottles)
[REMOVED THE sluggish tomorrow line]
An energy drink's what the doctor would order.

If you’ve danced up an appetite, Have a snack or two...(chips/pretzels)
But save room for breakfast,
We’ll be waiting for you!

Hugs and kisses, (Hershey kisses and hugs)
The new 'Mr. & Mrs.'
magbride Posted:

Re: OOT box poem


Posted by Colette

Hey Magbride, this is a VERY cute way to list your oot stuff!!! are you up for some quick edits with the meter? I made a few here, use any you like, or you know, ignore me...

An apple a day keeps the doctor away? (apples)
Two Advil will do the trick, we say! (advils)

Don’t forget to hydrate and drink your water, (water bottles)
[REMOVED THE sluggish tomorrow line]
An energy drink's what the doctor would order.

If you’ve danced up an appetite, Have a snack or two...(chips/pretzels)
But save room for breakfast,
We’ll be waiting for you!

Hugs and kisses, (Hershey kisses and hugs)
The new 'Mr. & Mrs.'



Thank you! Not much of a poet, so yes, I welcome help with the meter.
Colette Posted:

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You did a GREAT job; i only tweaked!!!!

dream426 Posted:

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Very cute.

diva7531 Posted:

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that is awesome!!!!!!!! I love it!!

Cpt2007 Posted:

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LOVE it!!

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