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Opinions again please :)

MerSaysEh Posted:

Opinions again please :)

What are your thoughts on how this is worded?

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halfbaked Posted:

Re: Opinions again please :)

Sounds good to me!

'Both hotels are wonderful options that we hope our guests will enjoy!'

I'd change this to 'we hope you will enjoy!' but that's because I'm nit-picky.
AwaitingAugust Posted:

Re: Opinions again please :)

i think you should put prices on there so that guests know what to expect before calling ...

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