Opinions needed for my e-party invites! Help!
I need to send a draft of my e-party invites tomorrow. This is what I would like to write on the invite. One problem.....the bold text is worded as if someone else is hosting, when we are hosting it ourselves. Any suggestions about re-wording or anything else about the wording? Thanks!
Maria is becoming a bride
And soon Jerry will be by her side.
Let's wish them lots of love and cheers
And good luck in the coming years!
Please join us for cocktails, dinner and dancing to celebrate the engagement of
Maria and Jerry
October 22, 2005
6 O'Clock in the Evening
RECEPTION HALL
New York, New York
Please RSVP by October 10th
(111) 111-1111
We look forward to celebrating with you!
We are also going to include direction cards from the catering site that has the full street address. For sake of space, I kept it off the invite and just listed city and state.
We are having a cocktail hour and sit-down dinner. Should I somehow mention that? Or is mentioning 'cocktails, dinner and dancing' enough? The party is 5 hours long.
Thanks girls!!!!!
Maria is becoming a bride
And soon Jerry will be by her side.
Let's wish them lots of love and cheers
And good luck in the coming years!
Please join us for cocktails, dinner and dancing to celebrate the engagement of
Maria and Jerry
October 22, 2005
6 O'Clock in the Evening
RECEPTION HALL
New York, New York
Please RSVP by October 10th
(111) 111-1111
We look forward to celebrating with you!
We are also going to include direction cards from the catering site that has the full street address. For sake of space, I kept it off the invite and just listed city and state.
We are having a cocktail hour and sit-down dinner. Should I somehow mention that? Or is mentioning 'cocktails, dinner and dancing' enough? The party is 5 hours long.
Thanks girls!!!!!
