opinions needed **UPDATED**

You girls are always so helpful, so I would like your opiions. As some of you may remember I have to redo my invites, due to minor changes. So my actual invites are done and I am wondering how to word my reception card. We are getting married at the RH, but I need to fill the page kinda, this is what I have (all opinions and suggestions appreciated ):

Pic below

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Posted by diva7531

You girls are always so helpful, so I would like your opiions. As some of you may remember I have to redo my invites, due to minor changes. So my actual invites are done and I am wondering how to word my reception card. We are getting married at the RH, but I need to fill the page kinda, this is what I have (all opinions and suggestions appreciated ):

Please join us
following the
ceremony
for
dinner & dancing
at half past
six o'clock
in the evening
Smithtown Landing
Country Club
495 Landing Avenue
Smithtown, New York

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I would add 'cocktails' to dinner and dancing, if you are having a CH. Is this the layout that you are planning on going with? As far as spacing the words?

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Posted by twinkletoes807

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Posted by diva7531

You girls are always so helpful, so I would like your opiions. As some of you may remember I have to redo my invites, due to minor changes. So my actual invites are done and I am wondering how to word my reception card. We are getting married at the RH, but I need to fill the page kinda, this is what I have (all opinions and suggestions appreciated ):

Please join us
following the
ceremony
for
dinner & dancing
at half past
six o'clock
in the evening
Smithtown Landing
Country Club
495 Landing Avenue
Smithtown, New York

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I would add 'cocktails' to dinner and dancing, if you are having a CH. Is this the layout that you are planning on going with? As far as spacing the words?

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So you think it should say:

cocktaisl, dinner and dancing?

They will b entered, that is just the way they fell when I copied and pasted

I know you want to take up space, but here are the changes I recommend:

We look forward to celebrating with you!

Please join us following the ceremony
for cocktails, dinner, and dancing
at
half past six o'clock in the evening


Smithtown Landing
Country Club
495 Landing Avenue
Smithtown, New York



This way it takes up space, but doesn't look too separated.

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Posted by MrsQ-in2007

I know you want to take up space, but here are the changes I recommend:

We look forward to celebrating with you!

Please join us following the ceremony
for cocktails, dinner, and dancing
at
half past six o'clock in the evening


Smithtown Landing
Country Club
495 Landing Avenue
Smithtown, New York



This way it takes up space, but doesn't look too separated.

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i like this one

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Posted by MrsQ-in2007

I know you want to take up space, but here are the changes I recommend:

We look forward to celebrating with you!

Please join us following the ceremony
for cocktails, dinner, and dancing
at
half past six o'clock in the evening


Smithtown Landing
Country Club
495 Landing Avenue
Smithtown, New York



This way it takes up space, but doesn't look too separated.

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I like this one...

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Posted by Mooshyboo

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Posted by MrsQ-in2007

I know you want to take up space, but here are the changes I recommend:

We look forward to celebrating with you!

Please join us following the ceremony
for cocktails, dinner, and dancing
at
half past six o'clock in the evening


Smithtown Landing
Country Club
495 Landing Avenue
Smithtown, New York



This way it takes up space, but doesn't look too separated.

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I like this one...

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I like this way better also, Ryan.

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Posted by diva7531

This is with Yessina's changes, which one do you like better?

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So happy to have helped! Looks great! I think the top/first one of the two revised is the best one. -Yesenia

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Posted by MrsQ-in2007

I know you want to take up space, but here are the changes I recommend:

We look forward to celebrating with you!

Please join us following the ceremony
for cocktails, dinner, and dancing
at
half past six o'clock in the evening


Smithtown Landing
Country Club
495 Landing Avenue
Smithtown, New York



This way it takes up space, but doesn't look too separated.

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The first one on top! Very nice, I like that lay-out!!

I like the second one!

The first line looks great as one single line rather than broken up.

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Posted by ik1

I vote #1

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Thanks Irene FH is finally up, so I'm gonna get his opinion.

Thanks girls!

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Posted by diva7531

This is with Yessina's changes, which one do you like better?

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These look great ryan. I like #2.

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Posted by tricia3381

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Posted by MrsQ-in2007

I know you want to take up space, but here are the changes I recommend:

We look forward to celebrating with you!

Please join us following the ceremony
for cocktails, dinner, and dancing
at
half past six o'clock in the evening


Smithtown Landing
Country Club
495 Landing Avenue
Smithtown, New York



This way it takes up space, but doesn't look too separated.

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i like this one

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me too - that looks perfect!

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Posted by melissankurt07

I really like the changes you made also, but I vote for #2. I just like how the first line is all on 1 instead of broken up. I think it sets it apart from the rest. Very nice!!!!

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me too

I can't decide!!! I like them both but if I had to choose it would be #1