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Opinions please...

Soon2BeMrs Posted:

Opinions please...

I want to do a memorial candle not sure of wording...i saw this on one of the boards which is intended for a program but i dont think i will be doing programs do you think it is to much to put on a memorial candle??


We thought of you with love today
But that is nothing new
We thought about you yesterday
And days before that too
We think of you in silence
We often speak your name
Now all we have is memories
And your picture in a frame
Your memory is our keepsake
With which we'll never part
God has you in his keeping
We have you in our hearts
In Loving Memory of
All the ones who could not be with us today
libby2595 Posted:

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wow... that's beautiful.

that is quite a bit of text. the only reason i don't think it would work would be.... how are people going to read it?

what i mean is, where is it going to be displayed?

if it's somewhere your guests will be able to read it, then i say go for it because it's beautiful.

hth
waterspout4 Posted:

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Beautiful, but too much IMO. Do some searches on memorial candles. I've seen quite a bit.

sarahradio5 Posted:

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If you want to make it work/fit, can you shorten it to:


We thought of you with love today
But that is nothing new
We thought about you yesterday
And days before that too
Your memory is our keepsake
With which we'll never part
God has you in his keeping
We have you in our hearts
In Loving Memory of
All those who could not be with us today

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