Mr. and Mrs. John and Amy Smith together with Mr. and Mrs. Antonio and Juliana Simpson Request the honour of your presence at the marriage of Lorraine Christine Smith daughter of Mr. and Mrs. John and Amy Smith to Alexandre Texeira Son of Mr. Julio Cesar Texeira Mrs. Juliana Simpson Saturday, the sixth of June Two Thousand and Nine at eight o'clock in the evening (night?)
*for now, forget capitalizations
My parents and his mom and step dad are helping to pay for the wedding, but his dad needs to be included on the invite or else he's going to be really offended. And the step dad needs to be there in too since he's helping to pay (like 10%)
Anyone have any better suggestions?
rocketsummer17
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that seems ok to me...it seems very wordy though. cant think of any other ways to word it though
bkbaby4life
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Mr. and Mrs. John and Amy Smith together with Mr. and Mrs. Antonio and Juliana Simpson, & Mr. Julio Cesar Texeira
Request the honour of your presence at the marriage of Lorraine Christine Smith to Alexandre Texeira
Saturday, the sixth of June Two Thousand and Nine at eight o'clock in the evening (night?)
wat about this? its less wordy. but will it be confusing?
poeticmelody
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Posted by bkbaby4life
Mr. and Mrs. John and Amy Smith together with Mr. and Mrs. Antonio and Juliana Simpson, & Mr. Julio Cesar Texeira
Request the honour of your presence at the marriage of Lorraine Christine Smith to Alexandre Texeira
Saturday, the sixth of June Two Thousand and Nine at eight o'clock in the evening (night?)
wat about this? its less wordy. but will it be confusing?
I like it and its definitely less wordy, but I feel uneasy about including his dad before the 'request the honour...' part cuz his dad is in Brazil and isnt even coming to the wedding. He just needs to be on the invite so he doesn't feel offended.
bkbaby4life
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Posted by poeticmelody
Posted by bkbaby4life
Mr. and Mrs. John and Amy Smith together with Mr. and Mrs. Antonio and Juliana Simpson, & Mr. Julio Cesar Texeira
Request the honour of your presence at the marriage of Lorraine Christine Smith to Alexandre Texeira
Saturday, the sixth of June Two Thousand and Nine at eight o'clock in the evening (night?)
wat about this? its less wordy. but will it be confusing?
I like it and its definitely less wordy, but I feel uneasy about including his dad before the 'request the honour...' part cuz his dad is in Brazil and isnt even coming to the wedding. He just needs to be on the invite so he doesn't feel offended.
oh goodness. thats a tough situation lol. in that case i think your version might be the best way to do it.
elysemichelle
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Posted by bkbaby4life
Posted by poeticmelody
Posted by bkbaby4life
Mr. and Mrs. John and Amy Smith together with Mr. and Mrs. Antonio and Juliana Simpson, & Mr. Julio Cesar Texeira
Request the honour of your presence at the marriage of Lorraine Christine Smith to Alexandre Texeira
Saturday, the sixth of June Two Thousand and Nine at eight o'clock in the evening (night?)
wat about this? its less wordy. but will it be confusing?
I like it and its definitely less wordy, but I feel uneasy about including his dad before the 'request the honour...' part cuz his dad is in Brazil and isnt even coming to the wedding. He just needs to be on the invite so he doesn't feel offended.
oh goodness. thats a tough situation lol. in that case i think your version might be the best way to do it.
what if, to make it even a slight bit less wordy, you wrote Mr. and Mrs. John Smith together with Mr. and Mrs. Antonio Simpson, & Mr. Julio Cesar Texeira
Request the honour of your presence at the marriage of Lorraine Christine Smith to Alexandre Texeira
Saturday, the sixth of June Two Thousand and Nine at eight o'clock in the evening (night?)
just cut out the other 2 names? The wifes name is technically implied by writing Mr. and Mrs. what do you think?
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What about this?
Mr. and Mrs. John Smith together with Mr. and Mrs. Antonio Simpson Request the honour of your presence at the marriage of Lorraine Christine Smith to Alexandre Texeira Son of Mr. Julio Cesar Texeira Mrs. Juliana Simpson Saturday, the sixth of June Two Thousand and Nine at eight o'clock in the evening (night?)
PegaLega
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I would scratch the beginning then-just do together with their parents at the
Basically the opposite way that it is done above. This way the names are still there but its less wordy.
HTH
Lorraine Christine Smith daughter of Mr. and Mrs. John and Amy Smith to Alexandre Texeira Son of Mr. Julio Cesar Texeira Mrs. Juliana Simpson Request the honour of your presence at the marriage of their children Saturday, the sixth of June Two Thousand and Nine at eight o'clock in the evening
Or you can do
Mr. and Mrs. John and Amy Smith Request the honour of your presence at the marriage of their daughter Lorraine Christine Smith to Alexandre Texeira Son of Mr. Julio Cesar Texeira Mrs. Juliana Simpson Saturday, the sixth of June Two Thousand and Nine at eight o'clock in the evening
poeticmelody
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thanks guys for all the help! I still have to pick which one looks best but all of yours do sound better than mine! :)
