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Opinions Please

barbtony Posted:

Opinions Please

Opinions please - To be put on the programs which I didn't want to do:

We would first like to thank you for all of the love and support you’ve given us throughout our lives and during this special time.

To those of you that were involved in the planning -We thank each and every one of you. You have helped us with so many details and given us the emotional support we needed during the past months. We love you more than you’ll ever know.

And to the family and friends who joined us today, in some cases traveling from far away…thank you for making such an effort to share this day with us.
AwaitingAugust Posted:

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I'd remove the 'first' in the first sentence (change to 'We would like to to thank you ....'

otherwise, it sounds good
barbtony Posted:

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Thanks Mor
MrsSx2 Posted:

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I like it and agree with Mor!

Did you wanna mention anything about people who have passed away? Some people do.
barbtony Posted:

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Posted by MrsSx2

I like it and agree with Mor!

Did you wanna mention anything about people who have passed away? Some people do.



I'm going to have a memorial poem with a bo-k of flowers set aside by the placecards. Do you think that's OK?
MrsSx2 Posted:

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Posted by barbtony


Posted by MrsSx2

I like it and agree with Mor!

Did you wanna mention anything about people who have passed away? Some people do.



I'm going to have a memorial poem with a bo-k of flowers set aside by the placecards. Do you think that's OK?



Yeah, I think thats really nice! Great idea!
barbtony Posted:

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Posted by MrsSx2


Posted by barbtony

I'm going to have a memorial poem with a bo-k of flowers set aside by the placecards. Do you think that's OK?



Yeah, I think thats really nice! Great idea!



Thanks for your help
NanandEric08 Posted:

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I think it sounds great and I agree about taking the 'first' out of the first line

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