Opinions Please! Does this look okay for a STD?

alixgirl Posted: Dec 04, 2003 09:32 PM

Opinions Please! Does this look okay for a STD?

Is it too plain? Any suggestions?

julz33 Posted: Dec 04, 2003 09:48 PM

Re: Opinions Please! Does this look okay for a STD?

What are you printing them on..paper? Magnet?
I think you should change 'travel accomodations have been made' to 'travel accomodations CAN be made' because they are booking the rooms themselves, right?

Alvatorre74 Posted: Dec 04, 2003 09:49 PM

Re: Opinions Please! Does this look okay for a STD?

I think its too plain..Not Eye catching...JMO

Plus I think u should put 2004 and your name should come first

butterfly20 Posted: Dec 04, 2003 09:51 PM

Re: Opinions Please! Does this look okay for a STD?

i agree with above that id change the hotel wording so it doesnt sound like your paying for hotel...

.. if its printed on plain paper, then id probably make it some script font.. IMO..

alixgirl Posted: Dec 04, 2003 10:40 PM

Re: Opinions Please! Does this look okay for a STD?

Thanks guys I'm not making a magnet and it will be on paper. I was thinking a light sage green with Black ink.

nov2004bride Posted: Dec 04, 2003 10:42 PM

Re: Opinions Please! Does this look okay for a STD?

I think it's sounds good except I agree with everyone above except for the too plain. I believe less is more so, I love that they are on the plainer side

mich Posted: Dec 04, 2003 10:48 PM

Re: Opinions Please! Does this look okay for a STD?

I think they look simple and elegant, but I believe some of the other ladies have some helpful suggestions. Good luck!

gertyrae Posted: Dec 04, 2003 10:51 PM

Re: Opinions Please! Does this look okay for a STD?

I would definitely add the 2004, you wouldn't believe the odd things people said to me after they got the STD.

alixgirl Posted: Dec 04, 2003 11:09 PM

Re: Opinions Please! Does this look okay for a STD?

Really! I thought it would be obvious. I guess I shouldn't assume anything.

KarenK122 Posted: Dec 04, 2003 11:09 PM

Re: Opinions Please! Does this look okay for a STD?

You should definately add the year. What are you printing that on?

alixgirl Posted: Dec 04, 2003 11:14 PM

Re: Opinions Please! Does this look okay for a STD?

Do u mean in terms of paper stock? That I don't know. All I know is that it feels nice. Not thin or flimsy.

oakslady Posted: Dec 05, 2003 12:32 PM

Re: Opinions Please! Does this look okay for a STD?

ok i agree - you should add 2004 because people are dumb and they will all be calling asking that
i would also include your full names if you are sending this to friends or coworkers this way they know who you are.
i wouldnt say travel accommodations
i would say 'accommodations are available at'
because people already know they are travelling and it isnt a package thing so it is only accommodations ( sorry that is the travel agent in me talking - lol )
so that is what i would change
jmo

wenndypoo Posted: Dec 05, 2003 12:37 PM

Re: Opinions Please! Does this look okay for a STD?

I like it! I don't think it's too plain at all. If it's printed on nice quality paper, it should look elegant and understated. At most, I might add a simple border. But that's JMO.

I agree with changing the wording of the travel arrangements, and adding last names and 2004. You wouldn't believe the confusion our STD's caused. We actually had people RSVP'ing to them! So don't over estimate people.

Nice work!