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Ordering invites on Saturday- Wording help

LizD Posted:

Ordering invites on Saturday- Wording help

Our wedding is 12/15 and we are having invites with a snowflake border by Carlson Craft. We are thinking of going with:

The snowflakes are falling, there is love in the air and warmth in our hearts.

Please join us as we,

Elizabeth
and
Mark

(insert help here)
give each other our lives - or -
give each other our hearts - or -
pledge our love as one - or -
any other suggestions

I like them all and am not sure.

Any suggestions would be great.


jennbaby Posted:

Re: Ordering invites on Saturday- Wording help

i like as pledge our love and become one

vamdep Posted:

Re: Ordering invites on Saturday- Wording help

how about just 'pledge our love'

I am not a huge fan of the 'as one' sentiment - I feel like it takes away all individuality.


I like the wintery part of your wording. My cousin had a winter themed wedding and it was so beautiful!! Good luck!
michele31 Posted:

Re: Ordering invites on Saturday- Wording help

I love the first part, but an not crazy about the other choses. I would use
as they the celebrate their marriage
wedbabe Posted:

Re: Ordering invites on Saturday- Wording help

If you like them all, you can try to combine a little bit of all three... 'As we...give each other our hearts and pledge our love as one.'

LizD Posted:

Re: Ordering invites on Tomorrow- Wording help

bump - any other suggestions, down to the wire
Teri Posted:

Re: Ordering invites on Tomorrow- Wording help

why not try www.verseit.com - I'm too not a huge fan of the 'two become one' line either - I feel that you're joining as one union, but still are 2 different people.

Sonicstef Posted:

Re: Ordering invites on Tomorrow- Wording help

How about pledge our lives?

dkga1026 Posted:

Re: Ordering invites on Saturday- Wording help

i like the pledge one best...
or how about
elizabeth
and
mark
pledge eternal/our love to one another
LizD Posted:

Re: Ordering invites on Saturday- Wording help

Thanks to everyone. I think I like 'pledge our love to one another'. Will see what he thinks when I get home.

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