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Please check my invite wording...

smilealways Posted:

Please check my invite wording...

and tell me if I need to fix anything! Thanks!

Beautiful is the day that is touched by love
Jack and Deborah ****
and John and Teresa ****
request the honour of your presence
at the marriage of their children
Christine Nancy
and Joseph John
on Saturday, the eighteenth of June
Two thousand and five
at eleven o'clock in the morning
The Vineyard Caterers
978 Main Road
Aquebogue, New York
Reception immediately following
ssdbk Posted:

Re: Please check my invite wording...

Are you supposed to capitalize the 'Eleven?'

suven Posted:

Re: Please check my invite wording...

no, you don't have to capitalize eleven

the only thing I thought of was, why not put the 'and' between you and your FH's name on its own line?

marriage of

Mary

and

John



Soon2BMrsA Posted:

Re: Please check my invite wording...


Posted by suven

no, you don't have to capitalize eleven

the only thing I thought of was, why not put the 'and' between you and your FH's name on its own line?

marriage of

Mary

and

John






Hi date twin! I was going to suggest the same thing.
smilealways Posted:

Re: Please check my invite wording...

I wanted to put it on a separate line, but it's $1 extra per invite to add that extra line just for that one word... is it worth it?

smilealways Posted:

Re: Please check my invite wording...

oops! Nevermind! I just called the invitation company and it's a one time charge - definitely worth it! Thanks!

JimmysBride Posted:

Re: Please check my invite wording...

Looks great. The only thing is I don't think you need the 'and' in the year. So instead of:

Two thousand and five

I think it's supposed to be:

Two thousand five

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