My parents are hosting but we want to mention my fiance's parents. What do you think? Does the spacing look right?
Mr. and Mrs. xxx Request the honour of your presence at the marriage of their daughter Gabriella Maria to Steven Robert son of Mr. and Mrs. xxx Saturday, the eighteenth of September Two thousand and four at one o'clock in the afternoon Saint Vincent Ferrer Church Corner of Lexington Avenue and 65th Street New York, New York
Is anything not capitalized that should be? Thanks !
FLaCaTaCa
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I am bad with capitalizing and all that stuff so I can't help you there but the wording is great!
butterfly91804
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Does anybody know if the groom's name is supposed to be written out with his first and last name if I am doing son of ......
kel2004
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The wording sounds great. I would put the groom's last name even though you are also putting his parent's names.
Stacey04
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Are you making your own invites? If not the invitation company will correct any capitalization..I think that if you are putting FH's parents, its not necessary to put his last name. IMO
tourist
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Yeah, I agree, I don't think you put last names twice.
Looks good.
babybride
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We didn't put the last name twice. We did Thomas Joseph son of Mr. and Mrs. XXX.
butterfly91804
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Thank you!
skew
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the only thing that needs to be changed is 'Requests'. it SHOULD NOT be capitalized
babybride
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Here is all my wording if you need help. Since we are both WM girls! It was all centered, but I can't get it to come up that way.
Mr. and Mrs. Armando XXX request the honour of your presence at the marriage of their daughter Laura Maria to Thomas Joseph son of Mr. and Mrs. Joseph T. XXX Saturday, the nineteenth of June Two thousand and four at a quarter past three o'clock in the afternoon Church of Saint Aidan Williston Park, New York
Response:
We look forward to celebrating with you!
Kindly respond before May 14, 2004
M___________________________________
[ ] Accepts with pleasure
[ ] Declines with regret
Reception:
Reception
Westbury Manor Westbury, New York
Cocktails served at half past six o'clock in the evening Dinner and dancing to follow
I didn't put exact addresses on these things since I made the tri-fold direction card.
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Two minor wording detailed I learned about when I ordered my invitations:
1. Some people feel that 'two thousand and four' is incorrect -- there shouldn't be an 'and.' I KNOW I've seen years written both ways, though.
2. The 'honour' can be spelled in the American manner if you prefer.
These aren't crucial issues. Just thought you should know!
tourist
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Posted by sweetadeline
Two minor wording detailed I learned about when I ordered my invitations:
1. Some people feel that 'two thousand and four' is incorrect -- there shouldn't be an 'and.' I KNOW I've seen years written both ways, though.
2. The 'honour' can be spelled in the American manner if you prefer.
These aren't crucial issues. Just thought you should know!
Thank you! I was wondering the same thing about honour. I don't remeber what I put for the year. I'll have to check. I made up my wordign, but I'm sitting on it for a week, to make sure I like it. I'm ordering on line, so I don't have someone to point out those little things.
