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please critique these vows...

CarrieAnn Posted:

please critique these vows...

I, R, accept you, CA, as my wife and partner in life.
Please share with me all the wonders life has to offer,
as we join our lives and hearts together.
We will spend our days in friendship and love,
following many paths, some straight, others winding.
May we always be open and nurturing, seeking the goodness in
ourselves and those whom surround us.

I give thanks for the gift of your being;
You are the one I admire, adore, and choose to be with forever.

It will be the same vow (with the name change, of course) for me.
What do you think??
THANKS!
RichsBride Posted:

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very pretty, it's familiar but unique! I like it.

CarrieAnn Posted:

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uhh-oh,
do I need to make it more 'us'

We need to have this done by tomorrow, and we are still trying to pick out readings and all of those other good things!!

Jeanene Posted:

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I like them - just reading vows gets me choked up!They are beautiful.
Sassy Posted:

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I love your vows - beautiful !!!!
jpsgirl Posted:

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i like them, but they are not really vows. I think vows are supposed to be promises of what you will do, like I promise to love and nurture you, I promise to walk by your side down the path of life whether it be straight or winding, etc. I don't think they are supposed to be a request, like please walk with me. A vow is a statement, not a request, from my understanding! the words are beautiful though!

brooke Posted:

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I agree. I don't think they're 'vows', but I think it's perfect for something like ' R and CA would like to express their devotion by sharing these words they've written for each other' or something like that.

I think they're nice!

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