Please double check my Invitation, Reception and Response card wording for me!

dancinmyazoff Posted: Jan 22, 2008 12:17 PM

Please double check my Invitation, Reception and Response card wording for me!

Please tell me if I have any grammar corrections or anything other corrections needed. Thank you!

INVITATION WORDING

Mr. & Mrs. Dominick Xxxxxx
request the honour of your presence
at the marriage of their daughter

Melissa Raffaela

to

Rocco Daniel

son of Mr. & Mrs. Rocco Xxxxxx
Saturday, the Seventeenth of May
Two Thousand and Eight
at Quarter past Two O'clock in the afternoon

Saint Kilian Roman Catholic Church
485 Conklin Street
Farmingdale, New York

RECEPTION CARD WORDING

RECEPTION

Reception will begin at Six O’clock in the evening at

Venetian Yacht Club
494 Fire Island Avenue
Babylon, New York

RESPONSE CARD WORDING

RSVP

The Favour of a reply is requested by April 10th

M____________________________

____ Number of Persons Attending

____ Number of Persons Regretting

jeffamanda080808 Posted: Jan 22, 2008 12:22 PM

Re: Please double check my Invitation, Reception and Response card wording for me!

Everything looks fine to me but...it should be O'clock, not O'Clock. That is how MS Word spells it.

minibride08 Posted: Jan 22, 2008 12:23 PM

Re: Please double check my Invitation, Reception and Response card wording for me!

I am NOT one for proofreading... sorry... Hopefully some other girls will respond on this.

However, one thing for the Reception card, we put:

'Please join us for Cocktails, Dinner and Dancing

Venue Name
Address
Etc (just like you have)

At Six O'Clock in the Evening '

Just a suggestion.... otherwise I think it looks great- from what I can tell....

PS- we did our entire invite in all caps b/c there are so many funny rules about caps- upper or lower...

missliss Posted: Jan 22, 2008 12:23 PM

Re: Please double check my Invitation, Reception and Response card wording for me!

All good to me except on the invite. It's not 'a' quarter past two. It's just Quarter past two....

Also, i think the address # of the places on both the invite and the reception card should be numerals (with address #s that big) and not written out...but that may be just an opinion.

dancinmyazoff Posted: Jan 22, 2008 12:24 PM

Re: Please double check my Invitation, Reception and Response card wording for me!

Posted by minibride08

I am NOT one for proofreading... sorry... Hopefully some other girls will respond on this.

However, one thing for the Reception card, we put:

'Please join us for Cocktails, Dinner and Dancing

Venue Name
Address
Etc (just like you have)

At Six O'Clock in the Evening '

Just a suggestion.... otherwise I think it looks great- from what I can tell....

PS- we did our entire invite in all caps b/c there are so many funny rules about caps- upper or lower...

lol yes ours is going to be all caps also!!!!